Alfred Hitchcock/correction

Alfred Hitchcock/correction
Message de nounoutte posté le 22-02-2013 à 15:59:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

j'ai une biographie de Hitchcock à faire en anglais. J'en suis ici, pourriez-vous me corriger si vous trouvez des fautes ?
Merci pour votre aide.

Alfred Joseph Hitchcock was born on August 13, 1899 in Leytonstone in the suburbs of London and died from a disease on April 29, 1980 in Los Angeles. He was a film directo.
At the time, Alfred Hitchcock was studiing in aN engineer school, after which he integrated the Hanley telegraph company. In parallel, he took some lessons at the ‘’ Beaux Arts ‘’ of London. But at the same time, he was really interested by the cinema, that why he joinde the Paramount studio in 1920, after short training as technician assistant. There, he conceived subtitle of silent films.
Two years later, he met his future wife Alma Reville, and was engaged as director assistant.
He tried to realize a movie with Number 13 but this one stay inchaved. Far from discouraging himself, Alfred Hitchcock persevered and signed in 1925 his first production ‘’ The pleasure garden ‘’. It was the begining of his career. He was in a huge success in England and somewhere else The thirty-nine steps, The man who knew about it too much and The lady vanishes

After that he moved on to Hollywood because he received a lot offers. Alfred Hitchcock, who the nickname was ‘’Hitch’’, went to USA for his dramatic movie thriller. Rebecca which was crowned Oscar of the best movie.
Enven if we was a lot of nominated ( 6 time As best movie director) he never gained only one of it.
But the public didn’t care of criticisms which were sometimes harsh with Alfred Hitchcock, acclaming Strangers on a train or Dial M for murder.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-02-2013 08:40

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Réponse: Alfred Hitchcock/correction de sherry48, postée le 24-02-2013 à 01:34:18 (S | E)
Hello.
Here are a few things to start with.
Alfred Joseph Hitchcock was born on August 13, 1899 in Leytonstone in the suburbs of London and died from a disease on April 29, 1980 in Los Angeles. He was a film directo_.
At the time, Alfred Hitchcock was studiing in aN engineer school, after which he integrated the Hanley telegraph company. In parallel, he took some lessons at the ‘’ Beaux Arts ‘’ of London. But at the same time, he was really interested by the cinema. that __ why he joinde the Paramount studio in 1920, after __ short training as technician assistant. There, he conceived ____ ___ ___subtitle of silent films.
Two years later, he met his future wife Alma Reville, and was engaged as director assistant.
He tried to realize a movie with Number 13 but this one stay inchaved. Far from ___ discouraging himself, Alfred Hitchcock persevered and signed in 1925 __his first production ‘’ The pleasure garden ‘’. It was the begining of his career. He was in a huge success in England and somewhere else The thirty-nine steps, The man who knew about it too much and The lady vanishes

After that he moved on to Hollywood because he received a lot __ offers. Alfred Hitchcock, who__ the nickname was ‘’Hitch’’, went to __ USA for his dramatic movie thriller, Rebecca. which was crowned Oscar of the best movie.
Enven if we __ was a lot of nominated ( 6 time_ As best movie director) he never gained only one of it.
But the public didn’t care of criticisms which were sometimes harsh with Alfred Hitchcock, acclaming Strangers on a train or Dial M for murder.
Sherry

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