Correction/motivation

Correction/motivation
Message de setoff posté le 25-02-2013 à 20:32:03 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,

Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mon texte s'il vous plaît?
Par avance merci.

Good morning,
By way of introduction, my name is XXXX , j’ai XX years old and I live a small village between XXXXX et XXXX.
I worked in the world of music for teen years and I also have been a waitress on weekends
What brings me to postulate here today is the desire to work for a company fame and notoriety as XXXX. I would really like to join its teams to expanding my skill set.
My strenghts are sense of listing and service and team spirit.
I am well-organized and rigorous, I am discreet woman and I seeking a positions matches my profil.
I am aware that my English is no great but I known that I make me understand.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-02-2013 21:08

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Réponse: Correction/motivation de krafter, postée le 26-02-2013 à 11:58:05 (S | E)
Bonjour,

Voici quelques pistes de correction. Bon courage.

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What brings me to postulate here today is the desire to work for a company fame and notoriety as XXXX. I would really like to join its teams to expanding my skill set.
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I am well-organized and rigorous, I am préposition manquante discreet woman and I auxiliaire seeking a positions matches my profil orthographe + mal formulé.
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Modifié par krafter le 26-02-2013 12:09

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