Correction/ phrases

Correction/ phrases
Message de aurelia25 posté le 25-03-2013 à 17:44:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger mes fautes ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

It is under construction since 2008
It will host 100000 people.
It will be the first city where there will not be carbon emissions.
There are which produce the energy of city
Theses means of transport don't use fossil energies.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-03-2013 18:08

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Réponse: Correction/ phrases de aurelia25, postée le 25-03-2013 à 18:27:03 (S | E)
De l 'aide s'il vous plait ?

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Réponse: Correction/ phrases de kadzona, postée le 25-03-2013 à 19:12:26 (S | E)
Hello, good evening. Here are my suggestions for things to consider/correct.

It is under construction since 2008. You need a different tense
It will host 100000 people. The verb "to host" generally means to act as a host (at an event or for a TV show) or to store (data) - as in a website.
It will be the first city where there will not be carbon emissions.
There are which produce the energy of city. To me, this sentence doesn't make sense and I can't work out what you are trying to say
Theses means of transport don't use fossil energies.

In the UK, we refer to the energy used for transport as "fossil fuel"

I hope this is of some help.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-03-2013 19:14
Please avoid writing in red when correcting, thank you

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Réponse: Correction/ phrases de gerondif, postée le 25-03-2013 à 19:40:52 (S | E)
Hello,
There are windmills which produce the energy of the city.
Probably one word is missing

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Réponse: Correction/ phrases de aurelia25, postée le 25-03-2013 à 20:44:53 (S | E)
Merci à tous .
En voici une autre. Merci d'avance:

This city is linked to sustainable development.It fight the global warning .

Merci.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-03-2013 20:48

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Réponse: Correction/ phrases de gerondif, postée le 25-03-2013 à 22:07:19 (S | E)
Hello,
This city is linked to sustainable development.It fight* (présent 3ème personne) the global warning

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Réponse: Correction/ phrases de notrepere, postée le 26-03-2013 à 04:32:41 (S | E)
Bonjour

Theses means of transport

(Theses is the plural of the word 'thesis')

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