Aide /Biographie

Aide /Biographie
Message de evilroller0 posté le 11-06-2013 à 17:33:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

Je suis nouveau et ceci est mon tout premier sujet.
J'aurais besoin de savoir si la biographie que je vais présenter à mon concours de Pré-Européen n'est pas truffée de fautes.
Il faut que ce soit excellent, car dans mon collège, les latinistes ne sont pas prioritaires par rapport aux autres, c'est-à-dira qu'ils passent les tests avant nous. Donc j'aimerais vraiment réussir

Biography Of Martin Luther King

Martin Luther King Junior was born on January 15th in 1929, in Atlanta Georgia.
In 1953, he became the pastor of the Baptist Church.
He married Coretta Scott the 18th June 1953. They had four children: Yolanda, Martin, Dexter and Bernice.
Peaceful activist for Black men’s Civil Rights in the U.S.A, for Peace and against the poverty, he organized and led in actions such as the bus boycott of Montgomery in 1955 to protect the voting rights, segregation and employment of ethnic minorities.
In 1957 he was elected president of the Southern Christian Leadership Conference, an organization formed to provide new leadership for the now burgeoning civil rights movement.
He pronounced the famous speech “I have a dream” the 28th August 1963 in front of the Lincoln Memorial in Washington.
He is supported by John Fitzgerald Kennedy in his fight against the racial segregation in the U.S.A. Most of these rights are promoted by the “Civil Rights Act” and the “Voting Rights Act”, under the presidency of Lyndon Baines Johnson.
Martin Luther King became the youngest winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1964.
That same year, he began a new campaign against the war in Viêt-Nam and poverty, ending because of its assassination the 4th April 1968 which was officially attributed to James Earl Ray.

Merci d'avance


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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-06-2013 22:23

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Réponse: Aide /Biographie de hushpuppy, postée le 12-06-2013 à 21:04:09 (S | E)
Bonjour

Biography Of Martin Luther King

Martin Luther King Jr. was born on January 15th in 1929, in Atlanta Georgia. January 15th 15th January
In 1953, he became the pastor of the Baptist Church. Il vous faut être précis
He married Coretta Scott the 18th June 1953. They had four children: Yolanda, Martin, Dexter and Bernice.
A peaceful activist for Black men’s Civil Rights in the U.S.A, he was for peace and against the poverty, and organized and led in actions such as the bus boycott of Montgomery in 1955 to protect the voting rights, segregation and employment of ethnic minorities. Abolish segregation, not protect it, cette phrase est maladroit.
In 1957 he was elected president of the Southern Christian Leadership Conference, an organization formed to provide new leadership for the then- burgeoning civil rights movement. "burgeoning" est peu utilisé, budding ou growing est plus courant
He pronounced the famous speech “I have a dream” the 28th August 1963 in front of the Lincoln Memorial in Washington. on dit gave/delivered
He is supported by John Fitzgerald Kennedy in his fight against the racial segregation in the U.S.A. Most of these rights are promoted by the “Civil Rights Act” and the “Voting Rights Act”, under the presidency of Lyndon Baines Johnson. au passé
Martin Luther King became the youngest winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1964. on dit recipient
That same year, he began a new campaign against the war in Viêt-Nam and poverty, ending because of its assassination the 4th April 1968, which was officially attributed to James Earl Ray. on dit "his/her/their/my/your" pour une personne et "its" pour tout d'autre

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