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Message de sylvievb posté le 20-11-2013 à 22:02:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger, une partie de mon avis personnel s'il vous plait.
Merci de votre aide.
But the narrator is against this opinion. Indeeed, he said to the child to listen him, because anything can happen, nothing is impossible.
I liked this text because it’s true, and even if people don’t believe in us and don’t trust us, it should always believe in yourself and persevere.
It’s a sign of hope for all children and all people who have a lack of confidence.
Finally, the peculiarity of this text is that the narrator uses modals (must, should, wont) as nouns.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-11-2013 22:47
Message de sylvievb posté le 20-11-2013 à 22:02:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger, une partie de mon avis personnel s'il vous plait.
Merci de votre aide.
But the narrator is against this opinion. Indeeed, he said to the child to listen him, because anything can happen, nothing is impossible.
I liked this text because it’s true, and even if people don’t believe in us and don’t trust us, it should always believe in yourself and persevere.
It’s a sign of hope for all children and all people who have a lack of confidence.
Finally, the peculiarity of this text is that the narrator uses modals (must, should, wont) as nouns.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-11-2013 22:47
Réponse: Correction /avis personnel de laure95, postée le 22-11-2013 à 13:47:12 (S | E)
Bonjour,
But the narrator is against this opinion. Indeeed, he said to the child (utiliser le verbe TO TELL,suivi directement de THE CHILD) to listen (il manque une préposition) him, because anything can happen, nothing is impossible.
I liked this text because it’s true, and even if people don’t believe in us and don’t trust us, it (à quoi fait référence ce pronom?) should always believe in yourself and persevere.
It’s a sign of hope for all children and all people who have a lack of confidence.
Finally, the peculiarity of this text is that the narrator uses modals (must, should, wont) as nouns?.
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