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Message de idrixi posté le 01-12-2013 à 11:37:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un oral mardi sur un texte que j'ai inventé.
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer s'il y a des fautes?
Merci d'avance
In 1442 Odette flew to join the north of France. She was determined to help the British soldiers and contribute to resistance on the French territory.
Once that her plane landed at Rouen she hastened to begin his mission. Her first objective was to establish contact with resistance groups. Few French who opposed the occupation advised her to go more in the south in order to help soldiers and better contribute to the rebellion.
Later she took the train to reach the region of Côte d' Azur in the south of France. She had invented an identity for not to be arrested by the Germans.
Over there she decided to create a cache for other spies who could join her. One day she managed to contact resistance groups. Very soon she participated in the resistance. His first mission was to help distribute the illegal logs toward occupied zone.These logs were used to inform the resistance who were in the occupied zone.
This mission was not easy because she had to be wary of German soldiers and Vichy which are hidden in the population.
In November the German advanced in the south of France worried Odette and the resistants.The British have chosen Odette as the official messenger of the internal resistance. She had to go to Marseille to deliver a message destined resisters who were in England.To they come to their aid.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2013 11:52
Message de idrixi posté le 01-12-2013 à 11:37:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un oral mardi sur un texte que j'ai inventé.
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer s'il y a des fautes?
Merci d'avance
In 1442 Odette flew to join the north of France. She was determined to help the British soldiers and contribute to resistance on the French territory.
Once that her plane landed at Rouen she hastened to begin his mission. Her first objective was to establish contact with resistance groups. Few French who opposed the occupation advised her to go more in the south in order to help soldiers and better contribute to the rebellion.
Later she took the train to reach the region of Côte d' Azur in the south of France. She had invented an identity for not to be arrested by the Germans.
Over there she decided to create a cache for other spies who could join her. One day she managed to contact resistance groups. Very soon she participated in the resistance. His first mission was to help distribute the illegal logs toward occupied zone.These logs were used to inform the resistance who were in the occupied zone.
This mission was not easy because she had to be wary of German soldiers and Vichy which are hidden in the population.
In November the German advanced in the south of France worried Odette and the resistants.The British have chosen Odette as the official messenger of the internal resistance. She had to go to Marseille to deliver a message destined resisters who were in England.To they come to their aid.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2013 11:52
Réponse: Correction/ Mission de gerondif, postée le 01-12-2013 à 15:20:50 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer s'il y a des fautes? oui, un certain nombre.
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert.
In 1442 Odette flew to join the North of France. She was determined to help the British soldiers and contribute to resistance on the French territory.
Once that her plane landed (after + plus que parfait) at Rouen she hastened to begin his(sa mission à lui ou à elle?) mission. Her first objective was to establish contact with resistance groups. Few (signifie peu de. vous vouliez dire: quelques français: a few French people) French (French seul signifie le peuple entier, on ne peut le fractionner) who opposed the occupation advised her to go more in the south (further South)in order to help soldiers and better contribute to the rebellion.
Later she took the train to reach the region of Côte d' Azur in the South of France. She had invented an identity (a forged identity: une fausse identité)
Over there she decided to create a cache for other spies who could join her. One day she managed to contact resistance groups. Very soon she participated in the resistance. His first mission was to help distribute the illegal logs (quel sens?) toward occupied zone.These logs were used to inform the resistance who were in the occupied zone.
This mission was not easy because she had to be wary of the German soldiers and of the Vichy informers which(l'antécédent est un humain, which ne va pas) are (prétérit)hidden in the population.
In November the German advanced(l'avancée des allamands, sujet de "inquiéta..." alors, advanced est faux) in the south of France worried Odette and the resistants(est un adjectif: un double click sur le mot résistant donne:
résistant nm (histoire : membre de la résistance) member of the resistance n
resistance fighter n (ou alors resisters que vous employez plus loin
.The British have chosen (mauvais choix de temps)Odette as the official messenger of the internal resistance. She had to go to Marseille to deliver a message destined to resisters who were in England.To they co(mauvais temps)me to their aid(structure française) (utilisez la structure to come and help).
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