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Message de jimmyjude posté le 01-12-2013 à 21:03:22 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je m'adresse à vous en espérant que vous pourrez m'aider. Je dois rédiger un texte en me mettant dans la peau d'Ann Nixon Cooper juste après qu'elle a entendu le discours de MLK de 1963.
Voilà donc ma production qui doit se situer entre 150/200 mots; je dois la remettre mardi à ma prof d'anglais. Si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger mes erreurs avant ce serait génial.
Merci beaucoup!
I remember... it was hot and crowded. It was 1963 and I was standing in front of the Lincoln Memorial, waiting for a taxi to go back home. I was 61 years old and I had just seen in front of me Martin Luther King said his famous speech “I have a dream”. I remember that he left me speechless with joyful tears all over my face. It was just incredible. I saw in his eyes the hope of a real change for our condition of black people in USA. During all my life before his speech I was terrified by the comportment of white people in front of me. They thought they were superior by the color of their skin and when I spoke to majority of them I had the impression to talk to a brick wall. And now, thanks to Martin, equality between black and white is more respected than yesterday. On the first time I've heard “I have a dream” from his lips, that gave me goose bumps, he was the change that we were looking for.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2013 21:37
Message de jimmyjude posté le 01-12-2013 à 21:03:22 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je m'adresse à vous en espérant que vous pourrez m'aider. Je dois rédiger un texte en me mettant dans la peau d'Ann Nixon Cooper juste après qu'elle a entendu le discours de MLK de 1963.
Voilà donc ma production qui doit se situer entre 150/200 mots; je dois la remettre mardi à ma prof d'anglais. Si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger mes erreurs avant ce serait génial.
Merci beaucoup!
I remember... it was hot and crowded. It was 1963 and I was standing in front of the Lincoln Memorial, waiting for a taxi to go back home. I was 61 years old and I had just seen in front of me Martin Luther King said his famous speech “I have a dream”. I remember that he left me speechless with joyful tears all over my face. It was just incredible. I saw in his eyes the hope of a real change for our condition of black people in USA. During all my life before his speech I was terrified by the comportment of white people in front of me. They thought they were superior by the color of their skin and when I spoke to majority of them I had the impression to talk to a brick wall. And now, thanks to Martin, equality between black and white is more respected than yesterday. On the first time I've heard “I have a dream” from his lips, that gave me goose bumps, he was the change that we were looking for.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-12-2013 21:37
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