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Message de maurice78 posté le 02-12-2013 à 19:09:06 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je dois présenter rapidement une série/film que j'aime beaucoup; j'ai choisi That'so Raven avec Raven Symoné.
J'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est correct.
That’s So Raven is an American teen sitcom. This sitcom produced by Disney Studios was created by Jean-
Philippe and Susan Sherman in 2003, and broadcast on Disney Channel between 2003 and 2007.
The sitcom takes place in San Francisco and revolves around the life of Raven Bakster played by Raven
Symoné, her friends Chelsea played by Anneliese van der Pol and Eddy played by Orlando Brown.
The raven’s family is also present in the background. it includes her mother Tania Backster (T'Keyah
Crystal Keymáh), her father Victor Baxter (Rondell Sheridan) and her brother Corry Baxter (Kyle Massey)
In this sitcom the main character,Raven,sees the future from it is small. Only her family and best
friends know the secret of raven. If vision is raven is happy,She does everything to achieve this vision.
If vision is raven is bad, She does everything to not achieve this vision.
But raven gets all the time in very funny situation.
Merci
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Modifié par maurice78 le 02-12-2013 19:14
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-12-2013 21:18
Message de maurice78 posté le 02-12-2013 à 19:09:06 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je dois présenter rapidement une série/film que j'aime beaucoup; j'ai choisi That'so Raven avec Raven Symoné.
J'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est correct.
That’s So Raven is an American teen sitcom. This sitcom produced by Disney Studios was created by Jean-
Philippe and Susan Sherman in 2003, and broadcast on Disney Channel between 2003 and 2007.
The sitcom takes place in San Francisco and revolves around the life of Raven Bakster played by Raven
Symoné, her friends Chelsea played by Anneliese van der Pol and Eddy played by Orlando Brown.
The raven’s family is also present in the background. it includes her mother Tania Backster (T'Keyah
Crystal Keymáh), her father Victor Baxter (Rondell Sheridan) and her brother Corry Baxter (Kyle Massey)
In this sitcom the main character,Raven,sees the future from it is small. Only her family and best
friends know the secret of raven. If vision is raven is happy,She does everything to achieve this vision.
If vision is raven is bad, She does everything to not achieve this vision.
But raven gets all the time in very funny situation.
Merci
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Modifié par maurice78 le 02-12-2013 19:14
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-12-2013 21:18
Réponse: Exposé/ That'so raven de gerondif, postée le 02-12-2013 à 19:16:04 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
le remplissage de départ est correct, les quatre dernières lignes beaucoup moins. erreurs en bleu
That’s So Raven is an American teen sitcom. This sitcom produced by Disney Studios was created by Jean-
Philippe et Susan Sherman in 2003, and broadcast on Disney Channel between 2003 and 2007.
The sitcom takes place in San Francisco and revolves around (is about) the life of Raven Bakster played by Raven
Symoné, her friends Chelsea played by Anneliese van der Pol and Eddy played by Orlando Brown.
The raven’s family is also present in the background. it includes her mother Tania Backster (T'Keyah
Crystal Keymáh), her father Victor Baxter (Rondell Sheridan) and her brother Corry Baxter (Kyle Massey)
In this sitcom the main character,Raven,sees the future from it is small. Only her family and best
friends know the secret of raven (Raven's secret). If vision is raven is happy(sens?),She does everything to achieve this vision.(sens?)
If vision is raven is bad, She does everything to not (dans l'autre sens)achieve this vision.
But raven gets all the time in very funny situation.(français traduit)
Réponse: Exposé/ That'so raven de maurice78, postée le 02-12-2013 à 19:27:50 (S | E)
Re,
That’s So Raven is an American teen sitcom. This sitcom produced by Disney Studios was created by Jean-
Philippe et Susan Sherman in 2003, and broadcast on Disney Channel between 2003 and 2007.
The sitcom takes place in San Francisco and is about the life of Raven Bakster played by Raven
Symoné, her friends Chelsea played by Anneliese van der Pol and Eddy played by Orlando Brown.
Raven’s family is also present in the background. it includes her mother Tania Backster (T'Keyah
Crystal Keymáh), her father Victor Baxter (Rondell Sheridan) and her brother Corry Baxter (Kyle Massey)
In this sitcom the main character,Raven,sees the future thanks to vision. Only her family and best
friends know Raven's secret.
If vision is raven is happy(sens?),She does everything to achieve this vision.(sens?)
Ici je voudrais dire que si la vision est heureuse elle fait tout pour qu'elle se rélalise et si elle ne l'est pas elle fais tout pour ne pas qu'elle se réalise mais j'ai du mal à formuler la phrase)
If vision is raven is bad, She does everything not to achieve this vision.
But raven put yourself in very funny situation.
Merci
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Modifié par maurice78 le 02-12-2013 19:28
Réponse: Exposé/ That'so raven de gerondif, postée le 02-12-2013 à 19:49:09 (S | E)
hello,
In this sitcom the main character,Raven, can foresee the future thanks to visions. Only her family and best
friends know Raven's secret.
If Raven's vision is a happy one,she does everything to make it happen.
Ici je voudrais dire que si la vision est heureuse elle fait tout pour qu'elle se réalise et si elle ne l'est pas elle fait tout pour ne pas qu'elle se réalise mais j'ai du mal à formuler la phrase
If Raven's vision is not a happy one, she does everything so that it won't happen.
But Raven puts yourself (herself)in very funny situations sometimes.
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