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Oral d'anglais /aide
Message de quentv10 posté le 11-12-2013 à 19:19:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
j'aurais besoin d'aide pour corriger mon texte d'anglais car je passe un oral demain.
Cela parle de la biographie de Rosa Park:

hello,i'm going to present rosa park's life . Rosa park was born on february fouth nineteen thirteen. She became famous on december nineteen fifty five in alabama because she refusing to give up herseat to a white passenger on a bus. She was then arrested and tried. Then she was ordered to pay a fine for public desorder and violation of local law. She was assisted by afro-american who boycotted buses. On thirteen nineteen fifty six the supreme court of the UA has prohibited racial segregation abuses. For my part rosa park was a heroin and an extraordinary person because she stood up against racism and she allowed to prohibit the segregation racial in the buses

Merci d'avance pour la correction !

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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-12-2013 21:43

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Réponse: Oral d'anglais /aide de gerondif, postée le 11-12-2013 à 19:37:31 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
l'oral ne dispense pas des majuscules.
hello,i(majuscule)'m going to present rosa park's life . Rosa park was born on february the fourth nineteen thirteen. She became famous on(in) december nineteen fifty-five in alabama because she refusing to give up her seat to a white passenger on a bus. She was then arrested and tried. Then she was ordered to pay a fine for public desorder and violation of local law. She was assisted by afro-american (est un adjectif)who boycotted buses. On thirteen nineteen fifty six (date incomplète, le 13 quoi)the supreme court of the UA has prohibited( present perfect impossible avec un passé daté) racial segregation abuses. For my part (bizarre introduction pour une opinion, sauf si vous enchainez avec I think)) rosa park was a heroin and an extraordinary person because she stood up against racism and she allowed to (un peu maladroit) prohibit the segregation racial (ordre des mots, the en trop)in the buses
(pas de "the" quand on parle en général)

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Réponse: Oral d'anglais /aide de quentv10, postée le 11-12-2013 à 19:43:04 (S | E)
ok merci beaucoup; je vais réorganiser tout ça.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-12-2013 21:44

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Réponse: Oral d'anglais /aide de quentv10, postée le 11-12-2013 à 20:49:04 (S | E)
Juste une petite question: que mettre à la place de afro-américain?

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Réponse: Oral d'anglais /aide de gerondif, postée le 11-12-2013 à 22:21:19 (S | E)
Well,
Afro American people, black people,

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Réponse: Oral d'anglais /aide de quentv10, postée le 12-12-2013 à 07:39:56 (S | E)
D'accord merci beaucoup de m'avoir aidé

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Réponse: Oral d'anglais /aide de bluestar, postée le 12-12-2013 à 18:48:58 (S | E)
Hello..

Rosa Parks pas Park

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