TPE cancer/aide
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Message de mar4gaux posté le 10-01-2014 à 19:00:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pour notre TPE sur le cancer nous voulons intégrer des témoignages en anglais, si vous pouviez nous aider un peu pour nos fautes, ce serait très gentil, s'il vous plait![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/content.gif)
Merci et bon week-end![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/p2.gif)
Voici les questions:
- Which cancer did you have?
- Which treatments have been proposed by the oncologist and which had you choose?
- Which was the undesirable effects of these treatments?
- Have we propose you some solutions for these unwanted effects?
- If you have to advise a treatment to someone who has the same cancer, which one will you choose?
Témoignage 1:
- I had the cancer of the lungs.
- For the treatments, I had not the choice, I had an operation and then chemotherapy. They would to do me a chemotherapy before my operation because the tumor had not a good positioning.
- After my operation and when I did the chemotherapy, I had a bad flavor at food, I had lost my appetite and my smell, I was tired and I throwed up.
- During the chemotherapy, in the drip, they added a drug against vomiting to stop them.
- I will advise the same treatment that I have enven if all treatment is different according to the place and the waist of the tumor.
Now, I have a medical monitoring every 3 month.
Témoignage 2:
- I have a cancer of prostate.
- At the beginning, they have been to suggest an operation(prostactectomy total) and I have accept but I had a recurrence 6 months after. I had to do radiotherapy but I refuse and I went to Paris. They advise me a traitement of hormonotherapy. After 3 months, the result was positive and yet today but I must continue the traitement during years.
- Sides effects are supportable. The disease is control for the moment .
- They advise me to have a good health, food( pomegranate juice,...), etc.
- I advise to the others patients to consult several doctors and I advise also to make prevention a maximum (children...).
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-01-2014 21:40
Message de mar4gaux posté le 10-01-2014 à 19:00:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pour notre TPE sur le cancer nous voulons intégrer des témoignages en anglais, si vous pouviez nous aider un peu pour nos fautes, ce serait très gentil, s'il vous plait
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/content.gif)
Merci et bon week-end
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/smileys/p2.gif)
Voici les questions:
- Which cancer did you have?
- Which treatments have been proposed by the oncologist and which had you choose?
- Which was the undesirable effects of these treatments?
- Have we propose you some solutions for these unwanted effects?
- If you have to advise a treatment to someone who has the same cancer, which one will you choose?
Témoignage 1:
- I had the cancer of the lungs.
- For the treatments, I had not the choice, I had an operation and then chemotherapy. They would to do me a chemotherapy before my operation because the tumor had not a good positioning.
- After my operation and when I did the chemotherapy, I had a bad flavor at food, I had lost my appetite and my smell, I was tired and I throwed up.
- During the chemotherapy, in the drip, they added a drug against vomiting to stop them.
- I will advise the same treatment that I have enven if all treatment is different according to the place and the waist of the tumor.
Now, I have a medical monitoring every 3 month.
Témoignage 2:
- I have a cancer of prostate.
- At the beginning, they have been to suggest an operation(prostactectomy total) and I have accept but I had a recurrence 6 months after. I had to do radiotherapy but I refuse and I went to Paris. They advise me a traitement of hormonotherapy. After 3 months, the result was positive and yet today but I must continue the traitement during years.
- Sides effects are supportable. The disease is control for the moment .
- They advise me to have a good health, food( pomegranate juice,...), etc.
- I advise to the others patients to consult several doctors and I advise also to make prevention a maximum (children...).
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-01-2014 21:40
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de violet91, postée le 11-01-2014 à 13:38:18 (S | E)
Hello ,
C'est un TPE , fin de 1ère S ? Vous avez déjà vos ' témoins ' ou vous inventez ces interventions ? Sujet bien délicat ...je passerai dans l'après-midi , mais êtes -vous sûre que votre professeur ( ou vos professeurs en approfondi , si c'est les cas) soi(en)t d'accord avec vous sur le choix? De nombreuses erreurs de conjugaison et grammaire , mais le vocabulaire recherché est intéressant . Assurez-vous que vous ne risquez pas de ' plomber ' l'ambiance de correction ; vous n'êtes jamais sûre de qui vous avez en face ...
Si l'on traite ce thème comme un reportage , cela peut toutefois être original .
See you .
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de mar4gaux, postée le 11-01-2014 à 14:47:20 (S | E)
Oui c'est à rendre pour le 21 et oui ce sont des témoignages que nous avons recueillis de deux personnes différentes. Nos professeurs sont tout à fait d'accord et trouvent que mettre ces témoignages en anglais est un +.
Pourriez-vous nous mettre en évidence ce qui ne va pas (grammaire, conjugaison...)?
Merci d'avance, nous aimerions l'avoir fini demain.
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de lucile83, postée le 11-01-2014 à 17:26:54 (S | E)
Hello,
Les erreurs sont en bleu. Les erreurs sont plus nombreuses dans le texte 2.
Voici les questions:
- Which cancer did you have?
- Which treatments have been proposed by the oncologist and which had you choose?
- Which was the undesirable effects of these treatments?
- Have we propose you some solutions for these unwanted effects?
- If you have to advise a treatment to someone who has the same cancer, which one will you choose?
Témoignage 1:
- I had the cancer of the lungs. lung cancer
- For the treatments, I had not the choice, I had an operation and then chemotherapy. They would to do me a chemotherapy before my operation because the tumor had not a good positioning.
- After my operation and when I did the chemotherapy, I had a bad flavor
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/us.gif)
- During the chemotherapy, in the drip, they added a drug against vomiting to stop them.
- I will advise the same treatment that I have enven if all treatment is different according to the place and the waist of the tumor
![](https://www.anglaisfacile.com/images/us.gif)
Now, I have a medical monitoring every 3 month.
Témoignage 2:
- I have a cancer of prostate. prostate cancer
- At the beginning, they have been to suggest an operation(prostactectomy total place adjectif) and I have accept but I had a recurrence 6 months after. I had to do radiotherapy but I refuse and I went to Paris. They advise me a traitement of hormonotherapy. After 3 months, the result was positive and yet today but I must continue the traitement during years.
- Sides effects are supportable. The disease is control for the moment .
- They advise me to have a good health, food( pomegranate juice,...), etc.
- I advise to the others patients to consult several doctors and I advise also to make prevention a maximum (children...).
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de violet91, postée le 11-01-2014 à 18:03:39 (S | E)
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Merci d'avoir répondu à ma question du choix . Vous pouvez encore améliorer votre production :
1- have been proposed > past perfect or simple past .
2 - concordance : traitement terminé : ...( aux actif simple past ) you choose ? Plutôt que had you chosen ?
3- these va présenter / those conclut
4 - si j'avais ..., je choisirais : hypothétique : if I past tense ( have ) , I + conditionnel présent .
5 - lung cancer : 0 article . L'organe concerné détermine en 1er ordre ( = breast cancer , kidney cancer ...) / Chemotherapy : no article sauf - a chemotherapy treatment / the Chemotherapy Foundation .
6 - je proposerais : I had no choice actually .
7 - pour éviter les répétitions de ' have ', to undergo au simple past = j'ai subi ( révolu)
8 -a bad positioning?
9 - my smell # my sense of smelling ( odorat)
10 ) to throw ( irregular > threw ) up > to give ( simple past ) up = I refused anything else done to me .
11 ) orthographe : vomit ( = sitting, travelling ) sinon vous débouchez sur un barbarisme et un changement de prononciation.
12 ) would be the same > as the ones I have had so far ( que j'ai eus - jusqu'ici ?)
13 ) all treatments are ...
14 ) attention voc . La taille de guêpe : waist ! La taille , dimension > ...?
15 ) monitoring est-il le terme correct ? a complete check-up , non ?
Bonne soirée.
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de mar4gaux, postée le 12-01-2014 à 14:56:36 (S | E)
Bonjour, merci de votre correction. Est-ce bon comme ça?
Voici les questions:
- Which cancer did you have?
- Which treatments have been proposed by the oncologist and which had you chosen?
- Which were the undesirable effects of these treatments?
- Have they proposed you solutions for these unwanted effects?
- If you had to advise a treatment to someone who has the same cancer, which one will you choose?
Témoignage 1:
- I had the lung cancer.
- For the treatments, I had not the choice, I had an operation and then chemotherapy. They would do me a chemotherapy before my operation because the tumor had not a good positioning.
- After my operation and when I did the chemotherapy, I had a bad flavour at food, I had lost my appetite and my smell, I was tired and I throwed up.
- During the chemotherapy, in the drip, they added a drug against vomiting.
- I will advise the same treatment that I have even if every treatment is different according to the place and the waist of the tumor.
Now, I have a medical monitoring every 3 months.
Témoignage 2:
- I have a prostate cancer .
- At the beginning, they suggested me an operation( total prostactectomy ) and I accepted but I had a recurrence 6 months after. I had to do radiotherapy but I refused and I went to Paris. They advised me a treatement of hormonotherapy. After 3 months, the result was positive but I must continue the treatement during years.
- Unwanted effects are supportable.
- They advised me to have a good health, food( pomegranate juice,...), etc.
- I advise to other patients to consult several doctors and I advise also to warn children...
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de mar4gaux, postée le 12-01-2014 à 15:02:00 (S | E)
Non plutôt comme ça:
Voici les questions:
- Which cancer did you have?
- Which treatments have been proposed by the oncologist and which had you chosen?
- Which were the undesirable effects of these treatments?
- Have they proposed you solutions for those unwanted effects?
- If you had to advise a treatment to someone who has the same cancer, which one will you choose?
Témoignage 1:
- I had the lung cancer.
- For the treatments, I had no choice actually, I had an operation and then chemotherapy. They would do me a chemotherapy before my operation because the tumor had not a good positioning.
- After my operation and when I did the chemotherapy, I had a bad flavour at food, I had lost my appetite and my sense of smelling, I was tired and I refused anything else done to me.
- During the chemotherapy, in the drip, they added a drug against vomitting.
- I will advise the same treatment that I have even if every treatment is different according to the place and the size of the tumor.
Now, I have a medical check-up every 3 months.
Témoignage 2:
- I have a prostate cancer .
- At the beginning, they suggested me an operation( total prostactectomy ) and I accepted but I had a recurrence 6 months after. I had to do radiotherapy but I refused and I went to Paris. They advised me a treatement of hormonotherapy. After 3 months, the result was positive but I must continue the treatement during years.
- Unwanted effects are supportable.
- They advised me to have a good health, food( pomegranate juice,...), etc.
- I advise to other patients to consult several doctors and I advise also to warn children...
Réponse: TPE cancer/aide de violet91, postée le 12-01-2014 à 21:13:35 (S | E)
Hello again ,
which treatment did you choose ? ....have you chosen si pas de date et qu'il est encore en traitement ...
Toujours pas d'article lung cancer : lung fonctionne un peu comme un nom propre /idem pour prostate cancer .
Et le problème de concordance à fignoler : hypothétique / aujourd'hui : If you had ... , what would ( conditional ) choose ?
Bien exploité , par ailleurs .
Good luck , now .
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