Bac /Texte correction

Bac /Texte correction
Message de camelia45 posté le 18-02-2014 à 20:21:35 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai besoin d'une correction pour mon texte s'il vous plaît
Merci pour votre aide.

This text untitled A patriotic American is an extract from "the pursuit of Happiness" by Douglas Kennedy and publishd in 2002.
It's a dialogue between the main character Eric Smythe who works for a Tv network and an FBI agent who accuses him of being a xommunist . This text relies to the myths of Mc Carthyism.This myths concerned the witch hunt in the 50's.Also, it concerned John McCarthy who is the founder of the mouvement.
The FBI agent asked at the beginning if he is or have been a communist. He doesn't admit immediately but thereafter we can see he admits but he didn't realize that his life is about to turned upside down because if he doesn't denounce other members of the party he'll have problem
As a conclusion,this text respects the notions of power because the myth of Mc Carthyism is a form of torture which feared communists.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2014 23:04

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Réponse: Bac /Texte correction de gerondif, postée le 18-02-2014 à 21:22:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

This text untitled A patriotic American is an extract from "the pursuit of Happiness" by Douglas Kennedy ,and published in 2002.
It's a dialogue between the main character Eric Smythe who works for a Tv network and an FBI agent who accuses him of being a communist . This text relies to the myths of Mc Carthyism.This myths concerned the witch hunt in the 50's. Also, it concerned John McCarthy who is the founder of the mouvement.
The FBI agent asked at the beginning if he is or have been a communist. He doesn't admit immediately but thereafter we can see he admits it but (concordance de temps à revoir)he didn't realize that his life is about to turned upside down because if he doesn't denounce other members of the party he'll have problems
As a conclusion,this text respects the notions of power because the myth of Mc Carthyism is a form of torture which communists feared .

Je ne suis pas sûr que vous ayez démontré grand chose en si peu de lignes. Le Mac cartyisme en lui même n'est pas un mythe, il a bien existé, c'est l'invasion supposée du communisme dans les institutions américaines qui en était un , si on prend la définition 5) du mot myth:
myth
noun
1.
a traditional or legendary story, usually concerning some being or hero or event, with or without a determinable basis of fact or a natural explanation, especially one that is concerned with deities or demigods and explains some practice, rite, or phenomenon of nature.
2.
stories or matter of this kind: realm of myth.
3.
any invented story, idea, or concept: His account of the event is pure myth.
4.
an imaginary or fictitious thing or person.
5.
an unproved or false collective belief that is used to justify a social institution.

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Réponse: Bac /Texte correction de camelia45, postée le 19-02-2014 à 15:03:59 (S | E)
Merci !!

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