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Message de kadora posté le 12-03-2014 à 18:56:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en première et j'ai un devoir d'anglais à faire : écrire une lettre de motivation. Je me suis aidée de mon cours d'anglais mais il doit sûrement me rester quelques fautes.
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer les erreurs de syntaxe ou les fautes d'ortographe...svp s'il vous plaît?
My Name is ***. I'm ** years old and I'm studying in High School. I'm interested in the job of a doctor. I have read in the newspaper that you are looking for doctors.
So I'm sending you my Cv and my motivation letter.
Firstly, I graduated the High School of Science and physical from 2009 to 2012, so I have got a diploma of the doctor. I have worked in a Hospital for four years with stick persons. When working at Hospital I looked how the doctors worked and sometimes I helped them to cure the patients.
Secondly, then speaking about the qualities required for this job, I can say that a doctor must possess such qualities as : sense of responsability, compassion, confidence, empathy, humane, forthright, respectful, thorough, communication skill and stress resistance. I think to have all the qualities necessary for this profession. I'm able to cure the patient and help them. So I'm the person that you are looking dor.
Could you have some questions, do not hesitate to contact me. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
To be considerate,
***
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-03-2014 19:32
Message de kadora posté le 12-03-2014 à 18:56:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en première et j'ai un devoir d'anglais à faire : écrire une lettre de motivation. Je me suis aidée de mon cours d'anglais mais il doit sûrement me rester quelques fautes.
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer les erreurs de syntaxe ou les fautes d'ortographe...
My Name is ***. I'm ** years old and I'm studying in High School. I'm interested in the job of a doctor. I have read in the newspaper that you are looking for doctors.
So I'm sending you my Cv and my motivation letter.
Firstly, I graduated the High School of Science and physical from 2009 to 2012, so I have got a diploma of the doctor. I have worked in a Hospital for four years with stick persons. When working at Hospital I looked how the doctors worked and sometimes I helped them to cure the patients.
Secondly, then speaking about the qualities required for this job, I can say that a doctor must possess such qualities as : sense of responsability, compassion, confidence, empathy, humane, forthright, respectful, thorough, communication skill and stress resistance. I think to have all the qualities necessary for this profession. I'm able to cure the patient and help them. So I'm the person that you are looking dor.
Could you have some questions, do not hesitate to contact me. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
To be considerate,
***
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-03-2014 19:32
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