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Message de snakest posté le 20-03-2014 à 19:04:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Je viens de passer un examen, et j'ai complètement raté la partie de reconnaissance d'erreurs. J'aurais voulu savoir si quelqu'un pouvait m'en donner une correction ~~svp~~ s'il vous plaît. J'ai un total de 20 phrases.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2014 22:30

Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de sbgs, postée le 20-03-2014 à 19:19:36 (S | E)
Hello,
tu peux toujours mettre les 20 phrases sur lesquelles tu as été évalué, les membres du forum pourront te corriger.

Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de snakest, postée le 20-03-2014 à 19:20:43 (S | E)
Hello !
Je vais faire ça Je tape et je poste

Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de snakest, postée le 20-03-2014 à 20:04:43 (S | E)
Merci pour votre aide.
Voici donc les 20 phrases.
Les propositions d'erreurs sont en majuscules.

1 - copyright law clearly STATED that you have TO HAVE the PERMISSION OF the authors or the publishers BEFORE COPYING their work.
2 - WHEN YOU SHOW HIM your LETTERS OF RECOMMENDATIONS, i'm sure he WILL NOT HESITANT to give you the salary THAT YOU WANT.
3 - THE staff WORKED THROUGHOUT NIGHT to meet the CLIENT'S deadline.
4 - we WILL BE TRAVELING with the vice president and his wife THEY ARE MEMBERS of the FINANCE COMMITTEE for the new ARTS CENTER.
5 - i think it WOULD BE EASIER to hold the AUDIENCE'S ATTETION if you HAD a slide show ALONG TO the lecture.
6 - INITIAL we were very anxious to start the computer seminar, but WE FOUND it SO DIFFICULT that we EVENTUALLY withdrew.
7 - DID YOU KNOW THAT you can save UP TO 25 PERCENT in DISABLE INSURANCE IF YOU ARE a non-smoker ?
8 - HAVING BEEN TO BARCELONA TWICE HIMSELF, bob TOLD US last week THAT AQUATICS SPORT are becoming INCREASINGLY POPULAR there.
9 - GONE THROUGH the folders ONE BY ONE, we were able TO FIND the missing invoice in the STORAGE DRAWER.
10 - REMEMBER THE BACKLOG from loast year, THE STAFF DECIDED to work A LITTLE OVERTIME every day TO AVOID A RECURRENCE.
11 - YOUR PAYCHECK for last week GIVEN to theHEAD OF your departement TO PASS ON TO you.
12 - the computer has MISTAKENLY canceled your CLUB MEMBERSHIP but it can BE REINSTATE by tonight or tomorrow AT THE LATEST.
13 - jeff and gloria WENT TO PICK OUT carpeting and decoration, INCLUDING FURNITURES; for the new vip LOUNGE that WAS OPENING on the third floor.
14 - WHEN WE ENTERING tokyo proper, WE DROVE right THROUGH A TUNNEL that OPENED INTO the royal gardiens.
15 - she REPEATED BECAUSE SHE DID NOT WANT any of her money INVESTED in the heavily advertised, but HIGH-RISK COMPANIES.
16 - biologist ARE ALWAYS SEARCH for INSIGHTS INTO the NATURE OF the human CELL.
17 - ALL THINGS CONSIDERED, the inclement WEATHERS this month HASN'T SIGNIFICATLY decreased productivity OF THE STAFF.
18 - these INTERESTED paintings WERE DONATED to the library BY the gilmore foundation OVER TWENTY YEARS AGO.
19 - the museum director was NEITHER FRIENDLY OR professional IN HIS APPROACH to the INTERESTED STUDENTS and their TEACHER.
20 - the deputy officer WAS CHARGED with LOOKING AT OVER the files TO find other evidence of WRONGDOING.

Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de gerondif, postée le 21-03-2014 à 19:04:58 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voici donc les 20 phrases.
Les propositions d'erreurs sont en majuscules.(ce sont donc vos propositions d'erreurs?)
1 - copyright law clearly STATED that you have TO HAVE the PERMISSION OF the authors or the publishers BEFORE COPYING their work.
2 - WHEN YOU SHOW HIM your LETTERS OF RECOMMENDATIONS, I'm sure he WILL NOT HESITANT to give you the salary THAT YOU WANT.
3 - THE staff WORKED THROUGHOUT the NIGHT(all night, all night through) to meet the CLIENT(customer)'S deadline.
4 - we WILL BE TRAVELING with the vice president and his wife THEY ARE MEMBERS of the FINANCE COMMITTEE for the new ARTS CENTER.
5 - i think it WOULD BE EASIER to hold the AUDIENCE'S ATTENTION if you HAD a slide show ALONG TO (along with, together with))the lecture.
6 - INITIAL we were very anxious to start the computer seminar, but WE FOUND it SO DIFFICULT that we EVENTUALLY withdrew.
7 - DID YOU KNOW THAT you can save UP TO 25 PERCENT in DISABLE INSURANCE Google donne disability insurance) IF YOU ARE a non-smoker ?
8 - HAVING BEEN(being tout seul irait) TO BARCELONA TWICE HIMSELF, bob TOLD US last week THAT AQUATICS SPORTS are becoming INCREASINGLY POPULAR there.
9 - GONE(going) THROUGH the folders ONE BY ONE, we were able TO FIND the missing invoice in the STORAGE DRAWER.
10 - REMEMBERing THE BACKLOG from last year, THE STAFF DECIDED to work A LITTLE OVERTIME every day TO AVOID A RECURRENCE.
11 - YOUR PAYCHECK for last week was(has been) GIVEN to the HEAD OF your departement TO PASS ON TO you.
12 - the computer has MISTAKENLY canceled your CLUB MEMBERSHIP but it can BE REINSTATEd by tonight or tomorrow AT THE LATEST.
13 - jeff and gloria WENT TO PICK OUT carpeting and decoration, INCLUDING FURNITURES; for the new vip LOUNGE that WAS(futur) OPENING on the third floor.
14 - WHEN WE ENTERING tokyo proper, WE DROVE right THROUGH A TUNNEL that OPENED INTO the royal gardiens.
15 - she REPEATED BECAUSE SHE DID NOT WANT any of her money (to be)INVESTED in the heavily advertised, but HIGH-RISK COMPANIES.
16 - biologists ARE ALWAYS(still: encore au sens de toujours) ~~SEARCH for~~ (looking for)INSIGHTS INTO the NATURE OF the human CELL.
17 - ALL THINGS CONSIDERED, the inclement WEATHERS this month HASN'T SIGNIFICAnTLY decreased productivity OF THE STAFF.
18 - these INTERESTED paintings WERE DONATED to the library BY the gilmore foundation OVER TWENTY YEARS AGO.
19 - the museum director was NEITHER FRIENDLY NOR professional IN HIS APPROACH to the INTERESTED STUDENTS and their TEACHER.
20 - the deputy officer WAS CHARGED with (signifierait accusé de/ in charge of)LOOKING AT OVER the files TO find other evidence of WRONGDOING.
je pense que je n'ai pas tout vu.....

Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de snakest, postée le 24-03-2014 à 00:44:45 (S | E)
oui c'est ca, en majuscule les propositions d'erreurs, il y a 4 parties en majuscules, 3 juste, 1 erreur, il faut trouver cette erreur ^^. Merci bien c'est sympa de ta part

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