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Message de cissoux posté le 20-03-2014 à 22:27:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'ai mon oral d'anglais mardi sur les notions "mythes et héros' et 'espace et échange'.J'ai déjà fait ma fiche mythe et héros; pourriez vous m'aider s'il vous plaît ?
At first , I will briefly define the notion of myth and heroes :
Originally, a hero was a demigod : a mortal man gifted with superhuman powers . Today, a hero is a person, man or woman, who is characterized by his bravery, his mental and physical strength and is famous for his exploits and heroic actions. A hero can be the main character in a film, a story or a myth. It has many human qualities , he is generous , loyal, just , kind, brave. A hero can also be a famous person who is worshiped and glorified .
A myth is a wonderful story , located outside of historical time and featuring heroic characters . It is a fictional story , a legendary story with imaginary characters ( god, demigod ) or supernatural ( angels, demons , monsters ) and the presence of imaginary shares ( own powers , he can fly eg ) .
I chose , in connection with the concept of myths and heroes the following question : Why are they heroes important to society ?
On the one hand , Heroes make us dream with the myth they represent. For example, the Harry Potter character who embodies the dream of each of us to have magical powers enabling us to undertake and get all what you want with a simple wave of a magic wand!
On the other hand , Heroes are role models for men , because of their capabilities and commitment to society as firefighters, military or the character of Robin Hood who robs the rich to the poor and make the people their money taken to eliminate injustices.
A hero can be someone famous and continue to inspire people long after their death as Nelson Mandela we studied current , he was a great man who fought tooth and nail to reconciliation between blacks and whites , for this he was sentenced to 27 years imprisonment. Thereafter was a member of several associations fighting against poverty or AIDS which made him a legend and a hero to everyone.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2014 22:42
Nous corrigeons ce que nous lisons, rien de plus.
Message de cissoux posté le 20-03-2014 à 22:27:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'ai mon oral d'anglais mardi sur les notions "mythes et héros' et 'espace et échange'.J'ai déjà fait ma fiche mythe et héros; pourriez vous m'aider s'il vous plaît ?
At first , I will briefly define the notion of myth and heroes :
Originally, a hero was a demigod : a mortal man gifted with superhuman powers . Today, a hero is a person, man or woman, who is characterized by his bravery, his mental and physical strength and is famous for his exploits and heroic actions. A hero can be the main character in a film, a story or a myth. It has many human qualities , he is generous , loyal, just , kind, brave. A hero can also be a famous person who is worshiped and glorified .
A myth is a wonderful story , located outside of historical time and featuring heroic characters . It is a fictional story , a legendary story with imaginary characters ( god, demigod ) or supernatural ( angels, demons , monsters ) and the presence of imaginary shares ( own powers , he can fly eg ) .
I chose , in connection with the concept of myths and heroes the following question : Why are they heroes important to society ?
On the one hand , Heroes make us dream with the myth they represent. For example, the Harry Potter character who embodies the dream of each of us to have magical powers enabling us to undertake and get all what you want with a simple wave of a magic wand!
On the other hand , Heroes are role models for men , because of their capabilities and commitment to society as firefighters, military or the character of Robin Hood who robs the rich to the poor and make the people their money taken to eliminate injustices.
A hero can be someone famous and continue to inspire people long after their death as Nelson Mandela we studied current , he was a great man who fought tooth and nail to reconciliation between blacks and whites , for this he was sentenced to 27 years imprisonment. Thereafter was a member of several associations fighting against poverty or AIDS which made him a legend and a hero to everyone.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2014 22:42
Nous corrigeons ce que nous lisons, rien de plus.
Réponse: Oral bac/aide de bluduck2, postée le 21-03-2014 à 15:52:11 (S | E)
Hello cissoux !Voici qq remarques
Ligne 1 :changez "today" ,recherchez "de nos jours"
Ligne 4 He ?/it ?
Ligne 5 simple past"to worship "
Ligne 6 Voc : shares ? voulez-vous dire"parts" dans une société ?
Ligne 9 Faute de frappe ? "they" au lieu de "the " .Mais vous parlez des héros en général, donc pas d'article.
Ligne10 The character of Harry Potter
Ligne 11 Confusionall that et "what"
Ligne 12 oubli du nom après "military" , préférez "soldiers"
Ligne 13 simple past "to rob"
Ligne 14 sens ? the people ...,
Ligne 15 temps "to continue"
Ligne 15 oubli du pronom personnel
Conseil : Si vous parlez de Nelson Mandela,donnez davantage de détails sur sa personnalité, sa détremination, son héroïsme .. .
I hope this helps ! Bluduck2
Réponse: Oral bac/aide de cissoux, postée le 21-03-2014 à 21:02:53 (S | E)
Hello Bluduck2 merci beaucoup pour votre aide je vais immédiatement procéder aux corrections
encore merci bonne soirée
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