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Message de lolilool posté le 22-04-2014 à 23:13:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans 2 semaines et je voudrais, si possible, que quelqu'un corrige mon texte et me dise s'il convient pour l'oral.
Merci beaucoup !!
I am going to talk about the notion of locations and Forms of power. In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence the behavior of people. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. He can be exerted by Justice or the medias (like television, radio, internet). We may answer the question: Does everybody in USA approve the gun legislation? We will see that it’s not still the case.
At first, we are going to be interested in the population favorable to this legislation that is the carrying of weapons. The second amendment of the Constitution of the United States of America mentions: “well-regulated Militia, being necessary to the security of a free State, the right of the people to keep and bear Arms, shall not be infringed”. All the American population is thus authorized legally to possess a weapon, without it’s listed in an administrative file. Moreover, the second organization pro-weapons, gun owners of America, to show a big radicality in its actions, supported by Ted Nugent, known for his commitment within the GOA.
But the problem is that for some persons, it becomes a game. We can speak of "school shooting" become a real phenomenon in USA. The purpose being to create a genocide in a school then to return the weapon against one. The most recent are that of December, twenty-twelve: the Slaughter of Sandy Hook's elementary school: a twenty-year-old man kills his mother with whom he lived, then kills twenty-six persons among whom twenty children, then commits suicide. This phenomenon thus questions the legality of the carrying of firearms, the object of which is the documentary "Bowling for columbine ". The making title references in the shooting of the secondary school Columbine to Littleton in nineteen-ninety-nine. James Brady in fact also its horse of batail, because his association "Brady Campaign" publishes an entitled poster "God bless America", including the number of deaths in several countries in one year, the USA having the highest number.
To conclude, I would say that the American citizens not need for a weapon to defend itself. It incites to slaughters and other accidents which could be avoided. It would be rather for the justice to carry out the duty and to make the order reign. Stricter laws to the carrying of weapons would be necessary.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2014 08:34
Message de lolilool posté le 22-04-2014 à 23:13:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans 2 semaines et je voudrais, si possible, que quelqu'un corrige mon texte et me dise s'il convient pour l'oral.
Merci beaucoup !!
I am going to talk about the notion of locations and Forms of power. In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence the behavior of people. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. He can be exerted by Justice or the medias (like television, radio, internet). We may answer the question: Does everybody in USA approve the gun legislation? We will see that it’s not still the case.
At first, we are going to be interested in the population favorable to this legislation that is the carrying of weapons. The second amendment of the Constitution of the United States of America mentions: “well-regulated Militia, being necessary to the security of a free State, the right of the people to keep and bear Arms, shall not be infringed”. All the American population is thus authorized legally to possess a weapon, without it’s listed in an administrative file. Moreover, the second organization pro-weapons, gun owners of America, to show a big radicality in its actions, supported by Ted Nugent, known for his commitment within the GOA.
But the problem is that for some persons, it becomes a game. We can speak of "school shooting" become a real phenomenon in USA. The purpose being to create a genocide in a school then to return the weapon against one. The most recent are that of December, twenty-twelve: the Slaughter of Sandy Hook's elementary school: a twenty-year-old man kills his mother with whom he lived, then kills twenty-six persons among whom twenty children, then commits suicide. This phenomenon thus questions the legality of the carrying of firearms, the object of which is the documentary "Bowling for columbine ". The making title references in the shooting of the secondary school Columbine to Littleton in nineteen-ninety-nine. James Brady in fact also its horse of batail, because his association "Brady Campaign" publishes an entitled poster "God bless America", including the number of deaths in several countries in one year, the USA having the highest number.
To conclude, I would say that the American citizens not need for a weapon to defend itself. It incites to slaughters and other accidents which could be avoided. It would be rather for the justice to carry out the duty and to make the order reign. Stricter laws to the carrying of weapons would be necessary.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2014 08:34
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