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Message de velxiorh posté le 01-05-2014 à 18:34:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je vais bientôt passer mon oral d'anglais et je voudrais recevoir un avis ou même un peu d'aide pour savoir si ce que j'ai fait est clair. Pour ce faire voici la préparation que j'ai faite sur le thème des Mythes et des Héros.
Fiche oral - Mythes et Héros :
I'm going to talk about the notion of myth and heroes .
First i would like to give a definition of that notion : a heroe can be defined as a character endowed with super powers and whose role is to save the world (Superman) , it may also be defined as an individual whose role in the world is critical in that their actions aims at changing society .
A myth is a traditional story, especially one concerning the early history of a people or explaining a natural or social phenomenon. So we can ourselves : "Is a hero an extraordinary human being ?" . In order to illustrate this notion , I have chosen one document about Oprah Winfrey and one famous myth : The American Dream .
So here we can focus on Oprah Winfrey to illustrate the notion of heroe. She is a black woman who is considered as a successful women due to her courrage. She was born during the segregation and she was poor , it was difficult for her to reach her goal but she was strong willed to reach a good career like a white person. In this document that we studied in class , we can see that Oprah overcame obstacles that stood in her way because of the color of her skin .Today she is considered as the most influential woman in the America and she became an example to follow in the society , she has completely changed the vision of the black women .
Next , I will talk about the myth of the American dream. The American dream is a set of ideas which state that all men can succeed if he goes to america. The idea of the American dream appeared in 1920 , when people began to have hopes for the American way of life , the society has projected a view of success and prosperity. Today this myth is no longer believed , people are aware of the new way of life : the life is more and more expensive than before.
Je voudrais savoir ce que vous en pensez s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2014 19:09
Message de velxiorh posté le 01-05-2014 à 18:34:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je vais bientôt passer mon oral d'anglais et je voudrais recevoir un avis ou même un peu d'aide pour savoir si ce que j'ai fait est clair. Pour ce faire voici la préparation que j'ai faite sur le thème des Mythes et des Héros.
Fiche oral - Mythes et Héros :
I'm going to talk about the notion of myth and heroes .
First i would like to give a definition of that notion : a heroe can be defined as a character endowed with super powers and whose role is to save the world (Superman) , it may also be defined as an individual whose role in the world is critical in that their actions aims at changing society .
A myth is a traditional story, especially one concerning the early history of a people or explaining a natural or social phenomenon. So we can ourselves : "Is a hero an extraordinary human being ?" . In order to illustrate this notion , I have chosen one document about Oprah Winfrey and one famous myth : The American Dream .
So here we can focus on Oprah Winfrey to illustrate the notion of heroe. She is a black woman who is considered as a successful women due to her courrage. She was born during the segregation and she was poor , it was difficult for her to reach her goal but she was strong willed to reach a good career like a white person. In this document that we studied in class , we can see that Oprah overcame obstacles that stood in her way because of the color of her skin .Today she is considered as the most influential woman in the America and she became an example to follow in the society , she has completely changed the vision of the black women .
Next , I will talk about the myth of the American dream. The American dream is a set of ideas which state that all men can succeed if he goes to america. The idea of the American dream appeared in 1920 , when people began to have hopes for the American way of life , the society has projected a view of success and prosperity. Today this myth is no longer believed , people are aware of the new way of life : the life is more and more expensive than before.
Je voudrais savoir ce que vous en pensez s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2014 19:09
Réponse: Oral / Mythes et héros de velxiorh, postée le 02-05-2014 à 00:38:25 (S | E)
Personne ?
Réponse: Oral / Mythes et héros de cha1212, postée le 02-05-2014 à 10:22:50 (S | E)
Salut ! je ne vais pas pouvoir t'aider pour la correction de la langue mais je suis dans le même cas que toi et du coup ton texte m'interroge.
Ton analyse est très bien je pense et ta définition aussi; mais : penses-tu que tu peux tenir 5 minutes ? C'est un peu court non ? ( moi c'est trop long mais bon) tu devrais parler d'un autre mythe et faire une comparaison ou une évolution .... enfin je ne sais pas trop quoi te dire.
( j'espère t'avoir aidé un tout petit peu)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-05-2014 12:50
Réponse: Oral / Mythes et héros de velxiorh, postée le 02-05-2014 à 14:49:14 (S | E)
Je te remercie tout de même
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