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Message de alinelac posté le 11-05-2014 à 19:27:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
voilà ce que j'ai fait, si vous pouviez corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît... Merci pour votre aide.
Espace Spaces and exchanges
I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges. The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges can appear on many forms: people, trade, information. We can wonder : What impact do global cities have on people's life? To speack about the notion of spaces and exchanges, we can define that according to the evolution of cities and their consequences. Cities can be considered as global if they have a significant impact on the world.
In the text of Charles Dickens and by observing the painting of Markino, we notice technologicals developments with the beginning of the industrialization in the 19th century. Dickens describes us a city polluted by the coal with a thick smog. It's a sooty city. But this evolution can be dangerous by health's people. For example to show the industrializaton we see the evolution of means of transport between cars, bus and horses carridge. Use the railway to transport merchandises, the Taylorism to the industry. It's a industrial revolution. The United kingdom was very powerful.
In fact, since the 1950's, cities of the world evolve and increase. For example, in 1950 there were only 83 cities over one million people, while today there are more 400 cities over one million people and 10 megacities. The notion of the megacities can define as a very large politican area with over 10 million of people with sprawling outskirts (vast suburbs) which gather several type of powers. The population gather in the inner of the city. But, now there are more people in the outer borough that in the town centre.
In the document speak about the megacities, it's in interesting illustration of the notion spaces and exchanges as it shows just how globalisation has changed our world. It speak about London the capital of united kingdom, today London remains a crossroads of thr world. It built on a river like most megacities. It is present evrywhere on water, on land and in the air. In this three dimensions evry minutes are very important. But when we see the airport of London whose have only two runways, we are surprised by the quantities of flight transported.
But this cities can be to reach by incident that why London is the megacity the most surveilled on the world. It can see all which takes place. This document presented by Big Brother illustrate the notion of globalisation of cities. This globalisation permit to see the world as a small village.
Even if the globalisation is essential to evolve, but do not be it for one part of population.
Today, despite evolutions there are still a lot of disparities in the population.
In the reportage of Boris Johnson, we notice that prices have been rising and the incomes doesn't follow, the population is more and more poor. People in this cities whose evolve, are more and more poor because the spending power falls. London fight this problem investing funds and taking measures to the most poorest people because the living-cost are more and more expensive.
When we look the interview of Allen Roome, we see that he speak about the means of languages in London. He notice a new phenomena, people use a language with an influence american, because of american television and internet. The notion of exchanges is respected but it can destroy several culture of London as here the accent of north of London begin to disappear.
The sprawling outskirts and popualtion's increasing cause increase petrol comsuption, lengthening pendumar journey time. That's why cities would found solutions to resolve differents problems to limit number of cars on the city.
When we look the concept of BedZED project, it aims to Aim at being environment-friendly. The project is designed to use only renewable sources generated on site. BedZED is low-energy-emission concept, cars are bannished, the project encourages public transport, cycling, and walking. It is a lifestyle to be adopted to avoid carbon emissions, it is thus necessary to use renewable energies and to save.
To conclude, the globalisation is beneficial to economical and political power but it is remaining uneven by the part of population who suffered to the evolution. We too much focused of the innovation, and it is only now that we realize the impact on the planet.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2014 20:58
Message de alinelac posté le 11-05-2014 à 19:27:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
voilà ce que j'ai fait, si vous pouviez corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît... Merci pour votre aide.
I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges. The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges can appear on many forms: people, trade, information. We can wonder : What impact do global cities have on people's life? To speack about the notion of spaces and exchanges, we can define that according to the evolution of cities and their consequences. Cities can be considered as global if they have a significant impact on the world.
In the text of Charles Dickens and by observing the painting of Markino, we notice technologicals developments with the beginning of the industrialization in the 19th century. Dickens describes us a city polluted by the coal with a thick smog. It's a sooty city. But this evolution can be dangerous by health's people. For example to show the industrializaton we see the evolution of means of transport between cars, bus and horses carridge. Use the railway to transport merchandises, the Taylorism to the industry. It's a industrial revolution. The United kingdom was very powerful.
In fact, since the 1950's, cities of the world evolve and increase. For example, in 1950 there were only 83 cities over one million people, while today there are more 400 cities over one million people and 10 megacities. The notion of the megacities can define as a very large politican area with over 10 million of people with sprawling outskirts (vast suburbs) which gather several type of powers. The population gather in the inner of the city. But, now there are more people in the outer borough that in the town centre.
In the document speak about the megacities, it's in interesting illustration of the notion spaces and exchanges as it shows just how globalisation has changed our world. It speak about London the capital of united kingdom, today London remains a crossroads of thr world. It built on a river like most megacities. It is present evrywhere on water, on land and in the air. In this three dimensions evry minutes are very important. But when we see the airport of London whose have only two runways, we are surprised by the quantities of flight transported.
But this cities can be to reach by incident that why London is the megacity the most surveilled on the world. It can see all which takes place. This document presented by Big Brother illustrate the notion of globalisation of cities. This globalisation permit to see the world as a small village.
Even if the globalisation is essential to evolve, but do not be it for one part of population.
Today, despite evolutions there are still a lot of disparities in the population.
In the reportage of Boris Johnson, we notice that prices have been rising and the incomes doesn't follow, the population is more and more poor. People in this cities whose evolve, are more and more poor because the spending power falls. London fight this problem investing funds and taking measures to the most poorest people because the living-cost are more and more expensive.
When we look the interview of Allen Roome, we see that he speak about the means of languages in London. He notice a new phenomena, people use a language with an influence american, because of american television and internet. The notion of exchanges is respected but it can destroy several culture of London as here the accent of north of London begin to disappear.
The sprawling outskirts and popualtion's increasing cause increase petrol comsuption, lengthening pendumar journey time. That's why cities would found solutions to resolve differents problems to limit number of cars on the city.
When we look the concept of BedZED project, it aims to Aim at being environment-friendly. The project is designed to use only renewable sources generated on site. BedZED is low-energy-emission concept, cars are bannished, the project encourages public transport, cycling, and walking. It is a lifestyle to be adopted to avoid carbon emissions, it is thus necessary to use renewable energies and to save.
To conclude, the globalisation is beneficial to economical and political power but it is remaining uneven by the part of population who suffered to the evolution. We too much focused of the innovation, and it is only now that we realize the impact on the planet.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2014 20:58
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