Summary/short video

Summary/short video
Message de jeje34 posté le 23-12-2014 à 15:47:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pour mon examen d'anglais, je vais devoir regarder une vidéo 3 fois, puis en faire un résumé d'environ 250 mots en 1 heure.
Donc je m'entraine et j'ai besoin de votre aide pour évaluer, premièrement ma compréhension, puis ma grammaire et mon vocabulaire et également la structure du résumé.
Voici la vidéo dont j'ai fait un résumé : Lien internet


Nowadays, people take a lot of pictures with their smartphones or their tablets.
So companies that developed pictures edition softwares, like Adobe, decided to launch applications on mobile devices, allowing to users to transform their images at fingertips.
Indeed, the application Adobe Clip offers the possibily to import a picture in order to manipulate it: users can select or cut an element, zoom on the image, add filters etc.
They can even take a picture of a real world and transform it into vectors for the virtual world.
Moreover, the application is user-friendly: it allows to move quickly and easily on the screen and offers only the most simple actions of edition. To do more difficult things, use of desk computer is adviced. Resolution of images is really attractive too.
Then, this application also offers to draw directly on the screen with a device which is look like a pen. Artists and illustators enjoy this new way to make art, because with this software and this device everything is possible: all the colors and any kind of tools are available at fingertips and it was not possible few years ago because mobile devices were not smart enough.
Thanks to these new kinds of applications, after take a picture of a landscape or a monument, we can even see what it looks like later or earlier in a day.

Merci d'avance pour votre aide. ;)

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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-12-2014 16:46

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Réponse: Summary/short video de sherry48, postée le 28-12-2014 à 21:02:32 (S | E)
Hello.
It's pretty good, but you can improve the areas I have indicated.

Nowadays, people take a lot of pictures with their smartphones or (their) tablets.
So companies that developed pictures edition softwares, like Adobe, decided to launch applications on mobile devices, allowing to users to transform their images at fingertips.
Indeed, the application Adobe Clip offers the possibily to import a picture in order to manipulate it: users can select or cut an element, zoom on the image, add filters etc.
They can even take a picture of a real world (maybe this would go better as an adjective)and transform it into vectors for the virtual world.
Moreover, the application is user-friendly: it allows* to move quickly and easily on the screen and offers only the most simple actions of edition. To do more difficult things, use of __ desk/desktop computer is adviced.(advice is a noun) Resolution of images is really attractive too.
Then, This application also offers* to draw directly on the screen with a device which is look like a pen. Artists and illustators enjoy this new way to make art, because with this software and this device everything is possible: all (the) colors and any kind/and kinds of tools are available at ___ fingertips, which and it was not possible __ few years ago, because mobile devices were not smart enough.
Thanks to these new kinds of applications, after take a picture of a landscape or a monument, we can even see what it looks (simple present not the best choice)like later or earlier in a day.

*should be followed by a noun, gerund or pronoun (adjectives with it are ok)
Lien internet
(for the word edition)
Sherry

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Réponse: Summary/short video de jeje34, postée le 03-01-2015 à 13:25:26 (S | E)
Thank you for your help!

This application also offers* to draw => also offers drawing
it allows* to move => it allows moving
Is it correct?

And can you help me to correct the " " faults?

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Réponse: Summary/short video de sherry48, postée le 03-01-2015 à 23:10:56 (S | E)
Hello.

For these 2, This application also offers* to draw & it allows* to move, consider telling who, or for move, you could add a suffix to make a noun.
which is look like a pen...2 present tense verbs?
Locate the subject of the sentence containing, 'after take a picture. ' Do you see why this doesn't work?
Maybe you could post your new version.
Sherry

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