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Message de jjduseptsept posté le 31-12-2014 à 15:21:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît parce que je passe à l'oralsvp
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges. This notion deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occuped and interaction between men and the different societies.Our world is built one the exploration of new space.The difference cultural, economic, sociological have characterized our modern world.
The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges can appear on many forms : people, trade, information. In class, we focused on one form of exchange : the immigration.We can ask ourselves why people immigrate to the USA ? We talking only about Mexicans.
In order to illustrate this notion I've chosen two documents : a recording called " New horizons " a text " A hard path to hope " and a newspaper " Mexican immigrations"
Mexican can only offer limited jobs opportunities that's why many Mexicans dream of crossing the border to find success and better prospects in the US. The recording talks about Mexican dream : leave Mexico for the US, have a job,get papers, came his family. There are better living conditions, better salaries and better education for kids in the US.
The text illustrates that the US-Mexico border is very dangerous.There are drug dealing, more and more immigrants die for crossing the border.. Much immigrant so they drop many of them in the desert .
In the newspaper, Laura Ingle explains the situation : we see immigrants in trucks it is illegal immigration. They are identified by the Mexican police with X-rays.
We can see all the difficulties they meet during their pursuit of the American dream. That is find a weel paid job that would allow them to improve their standard of living and make them happy. But American dream have a price and it's a dream. It isn't always true, only sometimes
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-12-2014 15:33
Message de jjduseptsept posté le 31-12-2014 à 15:21:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît parce que je passe à l'oral
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to talk about the notion of spaces and exchanges. This notion deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occuped and interaction between men and the different societies.Our world is built one the exploration of new space.The difference cultural, economic, sociological have characterized our modern world.
The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges can appear on many forms : people, trade, information. In class, we focused on one form of exchange : the immigration.We can ask ourselves why people immigrate to the USA ? We talking only about Mexicans.
In order to illustrate this notion I've chosen two documents : a recording called " New horizons " a text " A hard path to hope " and a newspaper " Mexican immigrations"
Mexican can only offer limited jobs opportunities that's why many Mexicans dream of crossing the border to find success and better prospects in the US. The recording talks about Mexican dream : leave Mexico for the US, have a job,get papers, came his family. There are better living conditions, better salaries and better education for kids in the US.
The text illustrates that the US-Mexico border is very dangerous.There are drug dealing, more and more immigrants die for crossing the border.. Much immigrant so they drop many of them in the desert .
In the newspaper, Laura Ingle explains the situation : we see immigrants in trucks it is illegal immigration. They are identified by the Mexican police with X-rays.
We can see all the difficulties they meet during their pursuit of the American dream. That is find a weel paid job that would allow them to improve their standard of living and make them happy. But American dream have a price and it's a dream. It isn't always true, only sometimes
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-12-2014 15:33
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