Comme des milliers de personnes, recevez gratuitement chaque semaine Aide/lettre motivation
Cours gratuits > Forum > Thèmes généraux, jeux || En basAide/lettre motivation
Message de mika73 posté le 05-01-2015 à 22:28:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Ayant fini mes études, je souhaite désormais me tourner vers l'étranger. Mon CV en anglais a déjà été corrigé grâce à un membre de ce site. Je dois faire maintenant ma lettre de motivation. Ce serait vraiment sympathique si quelqu'un pouvait m'indiquer s'il y a des fautes dans ce que j'ai fait s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear Mr X,
I am writing to apply for the position of restaurant assistant manager advertised in the Accor website.
During my last experience as restaurant assistant manager with the "xxxxxxxxxxxx" in X, I have had the opportunity to hire, terminate and train seasonal staff and manage food purchases. This experience will allow me to take on new responsibilities with your company rapidly.
I have a Master degree in Tourism and Hospitality Management with skills in knowledge of the French catering industry, management of hotel activities and know how to be successful in the world tourism.
The position of restaurant assistant manager at Accor Group attracts me because of the perspective of integrating a large company where career advancement is possible while bringing my skills and energy to the group.
I am enclosing a resume and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely.
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 05-01-2015 22:57
Message de mika73 posté le 05-01-2015 à 22:28:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Ayant fini mes études, je souhaite désormais me tourner vers l'étranger. Mon CV en anglais a déjà été corrigé grâce à un membre de ce site. Je dois faire maintenant ma lettre de motivation. Ce serait vraiment sympathique si quelqu'un pouvait m'indiquer s'il y a des fautes dans ce que j'ai fait s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear Mr X,
I am writing to apply for the position of restaurant assistant manager advertised in the Accor website.
During my last experience as restaurant assistant manager with the "xxxxxxxxxxxx" in X, I have had the opportunity to hire, terminate and train seasonal staff and manage food purchases. This experience will allow me to take on new responsibilities with your company rapidly.
I have a Master degree in Tourism and Hospitality Management with skills in knowledge of the French catering industry, management of hotel activities and know how to be successful in the world tourism.
The position of restaurant assistant manager at Accor Group attracts me because of the perspective of integrating a large company where career advancement is possible while bringing my skills and energy to the group.
I am enclosing a resume and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely.
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 05-01-2015 22:57
Cours gratuits > Forum > Thèmes généraux, jeux
INDISPENSABLES : 