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Message de anisaaa posté le 07-01-2015 à 15:34:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon texte s'il vous plait ? Fautes de grammaire, d'orthographe, ou autres.
Merci pour vos réponses.
My gap year.
For one year, I was in New York, for my gap year. I resided by my host family. I found them on the Internet with an agency. They are very nice people, especially my host brother and my host sister. She is fifteen like me and we went to school together. I had nice points in Maths. I'm good at it same in English. There, I had new friends. We visited some historic monuments, we walked in Central Park, we went shopping too. My host family's house is situated nearby the school and I went each morning to school on foot. Once in a while I was late because of my host sister : she didn't let me sleep. She is too talkative. My host brother is five years old. He is so cute. We played together in the garden. We made a lot of noise and the parents said nothing. They are so funny, they always made jokes. I enjoyed this year. They were my best holidays. I was too sad when I must come back to Belgium even if I missed my parents and my sister.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-01-2015 17:41
Message de anisaaa posté le 07-01-2015 à 15:34:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon texte s'il vous plait ? Fautes de grammaire, d'orthographe, ou autres.
Merci pour vos réponses.
My gap year.
For one year, I was in New York, for my gap year. I resided by my host family. I found them on the Internet with an agency. They are very nice people, especially my host brother and my host sister. She is fifteen like me and we went to school together. I had nice points in Maths. I'm good at it same in English. There, I had new friends. We visited some historic monuments, we walked in Central Park, we went shopping too. My host family's house is situated nearby the school and I went each morning to school on foot. Once in a while I was late because of my host sister : she didn't let me sleep. She is too talkative. My host brother is five years old. He is so cute. We played together in the garden. We made a lot of noise and the parents said nothing. They are so funny, they always made jokes. I enjoyed this year. They were my best holidays. I was too sad when I must come back to Belgium even if I missed my parents and my sister.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-01-2015 17:41
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