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Message de berenice217 posté le 25-01-2015 à 11:22:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
Je souhaite participer au programme Erasmus de mon université et je dois rendre une lettre de motivation en anglais.
J'aimerais que ma lettre n'ait aucune faute afin d'être sélectionnée.
Voilà ce que j'ai fait :
I am applying for the Erasmus exchange programm with the United States as part of my studies. I am currently studying first year of MCC Licence at the Université -------------. After completing two years of licence I would like to integrate the Prepa Celsa in third year. I am particularly interested in spending a semester at an English-speaking university.
I would like to emphasize that I am eager to benefit from this programme. Indeed, I know that english skills are a major qualification required for the journalism exams, especially for the oral test which is mainly in English. I am very glad to use this opportunity given to stack all the odds in my favour and achieve my dreams and ambitions of being a journalist.
I have a great command of the English language which would enable me to adjust easily to an English-speaking country and university. This is partly due to the english courses I took in Bournesmouth in England during summer 2010 and 2012. In 2013, I then spend one month in London with the organism “Education First” where I reached the C1 level. I intend to pass the CAE exam in march to confirm my english level.
In addition to enhance my chances to succeed to the journalism competitive exams, I will get a truly multicultural experience.
I would be very grateful if you give me a chance to participate in the Erasmus programme, which would mark my future professional and personnl development.
Yours faithfully
Si quelqu'un pouvait jeter un coup d'oeil et m'aider à corriger les fautes, ce serait vraiment sympa !!!
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2015 18:58
Message de berenice217 posté le 25-01-2015 à 11:22:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
Je souhaite participer au programme Erasmus de mon université et je dois rendre une lettre de motivation en anglais.
J'aimerais que ma lettre n'ait aucune faute afin d'être sélectionnée.
Voilà ce que j'ai fait :
I am applying for the Erasmus exchange programm with the United States as part of my studies. I am currently studying first year of MCC Licence at the Université -------------. After completing two years of licence I would like to integrate the Prepa Celsa in third year. I am particularly interested in spending a semester at an English-speaking university.
I would like to emphasize that I am eager to benefit from this programme. Indeed, I know that english skills are a major qualification required for the journalism exams, especially for the oral test which is mainly in English. I am very glad to use this opportunity given to stack all the odds in my favour and achieve my dreams and ambitions of being a journalist.
I have a great command of the English language which would enable me to adjust easily to an English-speaking country and university. This is partly due to the english courses I took in Bournesmouth in England during summer 2010 and 2012. In 2013, I then spend one month in London with the organism “Education First” where I reached the C1 level. I intend to pass the CAE exam in march to confirm my english level.
In addition to enhance my chances to succeed to the journalism competitive exams, I will get a truly multicultural experience.
I would be very grateful if you give me a chance to participate in the Erasmus programme, which would mark my future professional and personnl development.
Yours faithfully
Si quelqu'un pouvait jeter un coup d'oeil et m'aider à corriger les fautes, ce serait vraiment sympa !!!
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2015 18:58
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