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Synthèse/aide
Message de sarah679 posté le 01-02-2015 à 14:50:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je voulais vous demander si mon introduction pour ma synthèse en anglais veut dire quelque chose
Merci d'avance

We will talk about the notion Myths and Heroes. To begin I would like to give a definition.of this notion. A Myths is traditional story involving a heroe or a god, a kind of legend, or a typical ancient story . A Heroes is  person admired for his courage, brave acts, savior, model, risques his own life to save people, physical an spiritualy strong. Each book, each movie possesses a hero. They represent an ideal, they are models, and they embody values. Some people are considered like heroes on the real life too because they do extraordinary things or they promote a great message. They are symbols of peace, fight against racism, or equality. But a hero is not a model for everybody.
We may wonder : To what extent a hero must suffer to become a myth or a legend ? In the first part, we will talk about that


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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-02-2015 15:06

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Réponse: Synthèse/aide de danseuse, postée le 16-02-2015 à 18:41:32 (S | E)
Bonjour
We will talk about the notion Myths and Heroes. To begin First I would like to give a definition of this notion.to explain what is a Myths. A Myths is a traditional story involving a heroe or a god, a kind of legend, or a typical ancient story . A Heroe is a person who is admired for his courage, brave acts, savior, model, risques his own life to save people, physical an spiritualy strong. Each book, each movie possesses a hero. They represent an ideal, they are models, and they embody values. Some people are considered like heroes on the real life too because they do extraordinary things because of their extraordinary things or they promote a great message. They are symbols of peace, fight against racism, or equality. But a hero is not isn't a model for everybody.
We may wonder : To what extent a hero must suffer to become a myth or a legend ? In the first part, we will talk about that.

L'erreur est humaine !
Bonne soirée.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-02-2015 21:27
Pas de rouge/rose sur le forum, merci.

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Réponse: Synthèse/aide de here4u, postée le 16-02-2015 à 21:01:26 (S | E)
Hello !

We will talk about the notion Myths and Heroes. To begin XXXX I would like to give a definition.of this notion. A Myths is X traditional story involving a heroe or a god, a kind of legend, or a typical ancient story . A Heroes is X person admired for his courage, brave acts,X savior, X model, risques his own life to save people, ??? physical an spiritualy strong(who is ?). Each book, each movie possesses a hero(NO!). They represent an ideal, they are models, and they embody values. Some people are considered like heroes on the real life too because they do extraordinary things or they promote a great message. They are symbols of peace, fight against racism, or (for) equality. But a hero is not a model for everybody.
We may wonder : To what extent a hero must suffer (you have to decide whether to use a direct or indirect interrogative clause)to become a myth or a legend ?(??) In the first part, we will talk about that ???

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