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Texte/sortie clip
Message de dadoush35 posté le 13-03-2015 à 14:36:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
j'ai dû faire un texte sur la sortie d'un clip! c'est pourquoi j'aurais besoin dune correction s'il vous plait
Voici le texte :

Hello everybody.
We hope you are all fine. To be honest with you, we are very well !
And fortunately because we have a lot to do at the moment. All our hands are working really hard to prepare the next year, which is actually still here...
This year we planned to drive you with us in the new album and new show preparation. We decided to prepare for you one episode per month, so get ready !
In this episode, the merchandising preparation, the beggining of the album mix, the featuring recording, the first video clip release...
have fun watching !

Merci beaucoup pour votre aide!!

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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-03-2015 14:59

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Réponse: Texte/sortie clip de gerondif, postée le 14-03-2015 à 19:30:50 (S | E)
Hello,
Hello everybody.
We hope you are all fine. To be honest with you, we are very well !
And fortunately (français traduit, il faut dire and it's just as well because) because we have a lot to do at the moment. All our hands are working really hard to prepare the next year, which is actually still here.(ne veut rien dire, l'an prochain ne peut pas "être encore là. il vaudrait mieux dire qui sera bientôt là, qui arrive à grands pas))..
This year we planned to drive (mauvais choix de verbe , je pense, emmener, c'est take) you with us in the new album and new show preparation. We decided to prepare for you one episode per month, so get ready !
In this episode, the merchandising preparation, the beggining of the album mix, the featuring recording, the first video clip release...
have fun watching !

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Réponse: Texte/sortie clip de dadoush35, postée le 15-03-2015 à 18:57:33 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, correction effectuée :

Hello everybody.
We hope you are all fine. To be honest with you, we are very well !
And it's just as well because we have a lot to do at the moment. All our hands are working really hard to prepare the next year, which is actually already here.
This year we planned to take you with us in the new album and new show preparation. We decided to prepare for you one episode per month, so get ready !
In this episode, the merchandising preparation, the beggining of the album mix, the featuring recording, the first video clip release...
have fun watching !

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