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Message de lilis3511 posté le 22-04-2015 à 22:43:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin d'une petite correction sur cette partie de mon texte s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Moreover, in photos in this document , we can see children who demonstrate with signs where we can read « We won't go to school with negroes » , this photo shows that racial character concerns all of the population from old people to young people. Furthermore, in addition to an hard justice, some white people who wants to take justice into their own hands lynched some African Americans like with the group named « Ku klux Klan » founded against African Americans, it is a group very racist and violent. But in front of this violence and discrimination, some African Americans reacted for a change! The assertion of African American's community begins in 1955 in the city of Montgomery, state of Alabama. We can see with the document « Rosa Park »,that it is thanks to this woman that the fight against the segregation in Montgomery begins. She becames an iconic figure for the fight against segregation in USA, this earned her the nickname « mother of civil right movement ».
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2015 06:27
Message de lilis3511 posté le 22-04-2015 à 22:43:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin d'une petite correction sur cette partie de mon texte s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Moreover, in photos in this document , we can see children who demonstrate with signs where we can read « We won't go to school with negroes » , this photo shows that racial character concerns all of the population from old people to young people. Furthermore, in addition to an hard justice, some white people who wants to take justice into their own hands lynched some African Americans like with the group named « Ku klux Klan » founded against African Americans, it is a group very racist and violent. But in front of this violence and discrimination, some African Americans reacted for a change! The assertion of African American's community begins in 1955 in the city of Montgomery, state of Alabama. We can see with the document « Rosa Park »,that it is thanks to this woman that the fight against the segregation in Montgomery begins. She becames an iconic figure for the fight against segregation in USA, this earned her the nickname « mother of civil right movement ».
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2015 06:27
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