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Message de nono5656 posté le 25-04-2015 à 18:54:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjours tout le monde
j'ai fait un résumé sur le Roi Lion, j'aimerais votre avis et si vous pouvez m'indiquer mes erreurssvp s'il vous plait :/ Merci d'avance.
it's a story of Simba, a young lion immature and happy. he was impatient with the idea of becoming king. He is the son of King Mufasa and Queen Sarabi. He don't know that his uncle Scar, the little brother of King Mufasa is jealous of him because Scar has never supported to live in the shadow of his brother and just simply be a prince and not the King. Scar with the help of Hyenas will do everything to eliminate Simba and his father and succeeded Mufasa dies trying to save Simba to a terrible herd. Scar said at Simba that he is responsible for the death of his father and told him to run away and never come back. And Scar takes over the kingdom.
Simba meets a warthog Pumbaa and his companion a mongoose called Timon who will become his friend and his second family it will turns his childhood living with them in the manner of "Hakuna Matata," which means a life without worries.
Until the day by chance Simba Nala find his childhood friend who will tell Simba to return to the Pride Lands to resume its place as king because his uncle Scar made their living hell and terrorizing. Simba will therefore return er will defeat Scar and his army of hyenas, and becomes the Lion King.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2015 19:05
Message de nono5656 posté le 25-04-2015 à 18:54:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjours tout le monde
j'ai fait un résumé sur le Roi Lion, j'aimerais votre avis et si vous pouvez m'indiquer mes erreurs
it's a story of Simba, a young lion immature and happy. he was impatient with the idea of becoming king. He is the son of King Mufasa and Queen Sarabi. He don't know that his uncle Scar, the little brother of King Mufasa is jealous of him because Scar has never supported to live in the shadow of his brother and just simply be a prince and not the King. Scar with the help of Hyenas will do everything to eliminate Simba and his father and succeeded Mufasa dies trying to save Simba to a terrible herd. Scar said at Simba that he is responsible for the death of his father and told him to run away and never come back. And Scar takes over the kingdom.
Simba meets a warthog Pumbaa and his companion a mongoose called Timon who will become his friend and his second family it will turns his childhood living with them in the manner of "Hakuna Matata," which means a life without worries.
Until the day by chance Simba Nala find his childhood friend who will tell Simba to return to the Pride Lands to resume its place as king because his uncle Scar made their living hell and terrorizing. Simba will therefore return er will defeat Scar and his army of hyenas, and becomes the Lion King.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2015 19:05
Réponse: Aide/le Roi Lion de nono5656, postée le 26-04-2015 à 14:25:56 (S | E)
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Réponse: Aide/le Roi Lion de bluestar, postée le 26-04-2015 à 16:45:16 (S | E)
Bonjour..
Iit's a story of Simba, a young lion immature and happy (adjectifs devant noms). Hhe was impatient with the idea of becoming (je crois que vous voulez dire: to become)king. He is the son of King Mufasa and Queen Sarabi. He don't know that his uncle Scar, the little brother of King Mufasa, is jealous of him because Scar has never supported to live in the shadow of his brother and just simply be a prince and not the King. Scar with the help of hHyenas will do everything to eliminate Simba and his father and succeeded(temps) Mufasa dies trying to save Simba to a terrible herd. Scar said at Simba that he is responsible for the death of his father and told him to run away and never come back. And Scar takes over the kingdom.
Simba meets a warthog Pumbaa and his companion a mongoose called Timon who will become his friend and his second family. (nouvelle phrase) Iit will turns his childhood living with them in the manner of "Hakuna Matata," which means a life without worries.
Until the day by chance Simba Nala finds his childhood friend who will tell Simba to return to the Pride Lands to resume its place as king because his uncle Scar made their life a living hell
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