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Message de bacformom posté le 26-04-2015 à 01:10:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
préparant actuellement mon oral d'anglais pour le Bac en candidat libre, je recherche de l'aide pour m'aider à améliorer ma fiche. Je pense qu'elle estbourrer remplie de fautes, c'est pourquoi je demande votre aide 
Merci pour vos réponses !
I'm going to talk about the notion space and exchange.
A space is a limited area who's empty or used.
An exchange is the act of giving or taking one thing in general after receiving something else. Such as information ; Money or Material things.
I'm now going to answer the following question : What's the impact of these exchange between the different space on our society ?
To answer i'm going to speak about the advantages and after i'm going to speak about the Drawbacks
I. Advantages
These exchange Thanks to the New Technology as internet give the possibility of sharing information, knowledge or culture.
More than it with the context of numberous exchanges, all people are in obligation to speak with others, this fact is enriching them and the world, Because meet people and speak with them is a way for open the mind of people through the discussion and the fact of sharing you're culture or point of view about something.
These exchange increase the communication between the different population from different space.
And this communication have for impact the meet of these different population at the origin of mixed people who're a wealth for our world.
II. Drawbacks
The different exchange are possible as result some problems like inequalities at different degree (échelle?)
For example a country can be focus on his exchange of money ; tourist. And because of it the local people live bad it's the case of Singapour for example.
But this inequalities can exist at a biggest size i'm going to take the example of Africa.
This continent have a less rate of exchange in different domain like exportation ; medicine and because of it they can't earn money as they need or the disease had an high rate of spread.
On the contrary the Africa had an important rate of emmigration and this means that usefull people leave this continent.
As my opinion, the different exchange between the different space can have the two impacts, but these exchanges became a need and have to be managed to avoid these bad impact.
D'avoir pris le temps de lire.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2015 08:33
Message de bacformom posté le 26-04-2015 à 01:10:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
préparant actuellement mon oral d'anglais pour le Bac en candidat libre, je recherche de l'aide pour m'aider à améliorer ma fiche. Je pense qu'elle est
Merci pour vos réponses !
I'm going to talk about the notion space and exchange.
A space is a limited area who's empty or used.
An exchange is the act of giving or taking one thing in general after receiving something else. Such as information ; Money or Material things.
I'm now going to answer the following question : What's the impact of these exchange between the different space on our society ?
To answer i'm going to speak about the advantages and after i'm going to speak about the Drawbacks
I. Advantages
These exchange Thanks to the New Technology as internet give the possibility of sharing information, knowledge or culture.
More than it with the context of numberous exchanges, all people are in obligation to speak with others, this fact is enriching them and the world, Because meet people and speak with them is a way for open the mind of people through the discussion and the fact of sharing you're culture or point of view about something.
These exchange increase the communication between the different population from different space.
And this communication have for impact the meet of these different population at the origin of mixed people who're a wealth for our world.
II. Drawbacks
The different exchange are possible as result some problems like inequalities at different degree (échelle?)
For example a country can be focus on his exchange of money ; tourist. And because of it the local people live bad it's the case of Singapour for example.
But this inequalities can exist at a biggest size i'm going to take the example of Africa.
This continent have a less rate of exchange in different domain like exportation ; medicine and because of it they can't earn money as they need or the disease had an high rate of spread.
On the contrary the Africa had an important rate of emmigration and this means that usefull people leave this continent.
As my opinion, the different exchange between the different space can have the two impacts, but these exchanges became a need and have to be managed to avoid these bad impact.
D'avoir pris le temps de lire. -------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2015 08:33
Réponse: Bac/Space and Exchange de here4u, postée le 26-04-2015 à 13:21:30 (S | E)
Hello !
I'll start ...
I'm going to talk about the notion of 'space and exchange'.
A space is a limited area who's empty or used.
An exchange is the act of giving or taking one thing in general after receiving something else. Such as information, ; Money or Material things.
I'm now going to answer the following question : What's the impact of these exchangeS between the different spaceS on our society ?
To answer i'm going to speak about the advantages and after i'm going to speak about the Drawbacks
I. Advantages
These exchangeS Thanks to the New Technology asXXXXX internet give the possibility of sharing information, knowledge or culture.??? Cette phrase serait correcte sans le 'Thanks to = grâce à'
More than it with the context of numberous exchanges, all people are in obligation to speak with others, this fact is enriching them and the world,. Because meeting people and speaking with them is a way for open the mind of people through the discussion and the fact of sharing you're culture or point of view about something.
These exchangeS increase the communication between the different populationS from different spaceS.
And this communication have for impact the meet of these different populationS at the origin of mixed people who're a wealth for our world.
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