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Message de leavar posté le 26-04-2015 à 14:53:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez vous m'aider au niveau de l'orthographe et de la conjugaison de mon texte s'il vous plait?
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myths can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why we like so all of this heroes or myths?
So, firstly we will see why they become a heroes and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lot of people are considered like heroes but a heroes isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfil a lot of achievments. The heroes can accomplish this achievements through their profession as we have studing in class like the fireman or the humanitarian people who goes in the country touch than ebola for help the people the sick person. This people save many human life everyday, and put their life everytime in danger. But this type of achievements is also realised by the simple citizens who live an ordinary life since for example when they see an other people in danger, they help this person and save this life. But they are an other type of heroes, the people who became the heroes thanks to their achievements or was the emblematic person in their domain like example in the domain of the sports or the domain of politics.
As example at the heroes in the sports we can see in class Oscar Pistorius. Because Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete who was amputee to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, so the heroes in the sports. In the domain of the politics we have studing on Barack Obama, on a picture , in this document Barack Obama is represente like a man very charismatic. This man was the first presidents black in the USA. So this man was a model of sucess because before in the USA they are lot of segregation, the black people was always persecuted, and they are many interdiction against them. Like example in the bus, the black people can’t seat in some part of the bus. So the fact that Barack Obama is elected, makes an advancement into the war against the segregation.
So we can see to all the domain have many heroes, he has make something amazing or extrordinary for become a heroes or myths in his predilection domain.
All long in your life we have a model and we want to become like him, when we are young the first model was your mother or your father but when you grown you have an other heroes or model in your favorite domain, for example in the music, cinema, and many an other. We take him in heroes or in model, in first because we like their moral, physic or their job situation. In second time because it’s in the human nature to take a model to carry on, to an other people for try to become like him so your ideal.
But a heroes for someone isn’t necessarly a heoes for an other people, because a people who like more them, because for a people who like the music his heroes is certainly situated into the music domain. In fact the heroes depend of your of interest.
In conclusion a heroes or a myths is a person who make something different than another people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, found a new technology, make a discover for save many life, light up for become a model for the other people. We need them because we have dream to become like them and have the same moral, physic or job because we want to light up and become a heroes or a myths to.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2015 19:04
Mise en forme standard.
Message de leavar posté le 26-04-2015 à 14:53:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez vous m'aider au niveau de l'orthographe et de la conjugaison de mon texte s'il vous plait?
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myths can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why we like so all of this heroes or myths?
So, firstly we will see why they become a heroes and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lot of people are considered like heroes but a heroes isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfil a lot of achievments. The heroes can accomplish this achievements through their profession as we have studing in class like the fireman or the humanitarian people who goes in the country touch than ebola for help the people the sick person. This people save many human life everyday, and put their life everytime in danger. But this type of achievements is also realised by the simple citizens who live an ordinary life since for example when they see an other people in danger, they help this person and save this life. But they are an other type of heroes, the people who became the heroes thanks to their achievements or was the emblematic person in their domain like example in the domain of the sports or the domain of politics.
As example at the heroes in the sports we can see in class Oscar Pistorius. Because Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete who was amputee to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, so the heroes in the sports. In the domain of the politics we have studing on Barack Obama, on a picture , in this document Barack Obama is represente like a man very charismatic. This man was the first presidents black in the USA. So this man was a model of sucess because before in the USA they are lot of segregation, the black people was always persecuted, and they are many interdiction against them. Like example in the bus, the black people can’t seat in some part of the bus. So the fact that Barack Obama is elected, makes an advancement into the war against the segregation.
So we can see to all the domain have many heroes, he has make something amazing or extrordinary for become a heroes or myths in his predilection domain.
All long in your life we have a model and we want to become like him, when we are young the first model was your mother or your father but when you grown you have an other heroes or model in your favorite domain, for example in the music, cinema, and many an other. We take him in heroes or in model, in first because we like their moral, physic or their job situation. In second time because it’s in the human nature to take a model to carry on, to an other people for try to become like him so your ideal.
But a heroes for someone isn’t necessarly a heoes for an other people, because a people who like more them, because for a people who like the music his heroes is certainly situated into the music domain. In fact the heroes depend of your of interest.
In conclusion a heroes or a myths is a person who make something different than another people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, found a new technology, make a discover for save many life, light up for become a model for the other people. We need them because we have dream to become like them and have the same moral, physic or job because we want to light up and become a heroes or a myths to.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2015 19:04
Mise en forme standard.
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 26-04-2015 à 16:25:49 (S | E)
Bonjour,
grâce à vous,j'ai retrouvé avec plaisir sur le web Vice President Dan Quayle orthographiant potatoe avec un e devant les caméras en 1992, ce qui a ruiné sa carrière politique.
les noms terminés par un o seul font un pluriel en es: comme les noms terminés par s, sh, ch, x, z
a hero, 2 heroes.
a potato, 2 potatoes
a tomato, 2 tomatoes
la règle s'applique aussi a do qui devient does, a go qui devient goes....
Par contre, si le mot se termine par io, oo, disons deux voyelles, alors le s seul suffit:
a zoo, 2 zoos
a radio, 2 radios.
idem pour les verbes: she boos, she woos...
Chez vous, c'est le contraire, vous n'identifiez pas les pluriels et vous nous dites alors:
a myths, a heroes..... il va quand même falloir corriger cela.
ereurs en bleu, corrections en vert.
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myths can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero(là, il est juste) can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why we like so (forme interrogative fausse, où est le do?) all of this heroes or myths?
So, firstly we will see why they become a heroes and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lot of people are considered like heroes but a heroes isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfil (s du présent) a lot of achievments. The heroes can accomplish this achievements through their profession as we have studing in class like the fireman or the humanitarian people who goes in the country touch than ebola for help the people, the sick
As example at the heroes in the sports we can see in class **(manque le verbe de la principale) Oscar Pistorius. (incorrect de commencer une phrase par because)Because Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete who was amputee to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, so the heroes in the sports. In the domain of the politics we have studing on Barack Obama, on a picture , in this document Barack Obama is represente like a man very charismatic (mettez man à la fin). This man was the first presidents(vous n'identifiez vraiment pas le s de pluriel!) black(mettez black devant president) in the USA. So this man was a model of sucess because before in the USA they are( il y avait)a lot of segregation, the black people was(pluriel!) always persecuted, and they are(il y avait, conjuguez there is, there are, there was, there were) many interdiction(derrière many, autant mettre un pluriel) against them. Like example in the bus, the black people can’t seat( est un nom (siège) pas le verbe qui est sit; On entend quand même souvent "sit down" dans une salle de classe en début de cours, non ?) in some part of the bus.(ce some signifie" dans une certaine partie du bus", commme si vous ne saviez pas où les noirs n'avaient pas le droit de s'asseoir. Une telle imprécision vous fera mal voir de l'examinateur) So the fact that Barack Obama is(plutôt was, c'était il y a 7 ans) elected, makes an advancement into the war against
So we can see to all the domain have many heroes, he has make(heroes ne peut pas devenir he, et make est faux, il faut un participe passé) something amazing or extraordinary for become a heroes or myths in his predilection domain.(ordre des mots)
All long in your life we (your et we ne vont pas ensemble) have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we are young the first model was(was ne va pas après are,concordance des temps) your mother or your father but when you grown you have an other heroes or model in your favorite domain, for example in the music, cinema, and many an other.(mettez other seul au pluriel) We take him in heroes or in model(mal construit), in first because we like their(vous dites we take him, singulier, donc their ne va pas) moral, physic or their job situation. In second time because it’s in the human nature to take a model to carry on, to an other people for try to become like him so your ideal.(mal construit)
But a heroes for someone isn’t necessarly a heroes for an other people, because a people who like more them(mal construit, sens ??), because for a people (quelqu'un se dit somebody) who like(le s du présent 3ème personne) the music his heroes is(pluriel) certainly situated into the music domain. In fact the heroes depend of your of interest.
In conclusion a heroes or a myths is a person who make(le s) something different than another people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, found a new technology, make a discover to save many life(pluriel), light up(sens?) for become a model for the other people. We need them because we
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de leavar, postée le 26-04-2015 à 19:25:32 (S | E)
Merci pour votre réponse je vais essayer de corriger mes erreurs
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de leavar, postée le 26-04-2015 à 21:49:21 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me dire si ma correction est correcte s'il vous plait? Merci pour vos réponses .
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why we like so all of this heroes or myths?
So, firstly we will see why they become hero and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lot of people are considered like heroes but hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfils a lot of achievements. The heroes can accomplish achievement through their profession as we studing in class like the fireman or the humanitarian people who go in the country affected by ebola to help the people the sick. These people save many human lives everyday, and put their lives everytime in danger. But this type of achievement is also realised by the simple citizens who live an ordinary life since for example when they see somebody else in danger, they help this person and save his life. But they are an other type of hero, the people who became heroes thanks to their achievements or were an emblematic person in their domain, in the domain of sports or the domain of politics.
As example a hero in sports, in class we studing on Oscar Pistorius. Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete who was felled to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, so the hero in the sports. In the domain of the politics, in class we studing on Barack Obama, on a picture , in this document Barack Obama is represent like a very charismatic man. This man was the first black president in the USA. So this man was a model of sucess because before in the USA there was lot of segregation, the black people were always persecuted, and there were many interdictions against them. As for example in the bus, the black people can’t sit in some part of the bus. So the fact that Barack Obama was elected, makes an advancement into the war against segregation.
So we can see to all the domain have many heroes, they made something amazing or extraordinary to become a hero or myth in his domain of predilection.
All long in our life we have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we are young the first model were your mother or your father but when you grow you have an other hero or model in your favorite domain, for example in music, cinema and many others. We take him or her in hero, first because we like his moral, physic or his job situation. Secondly because it’s in human nature to take a model to carry on, to an other people for try to become like him so your ideal.
But hero for someone isn’t necessarly a hero for an other, because for somebody who likes the music his heroes was certainly situated into the music domain. In fact the heroes depend of your interest.
In conclusion a hero or a myth is a person who makes something different from another people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, find a new technology, make a discovery to save many lives. We need them because we dream of becoming like them and have the same moral, physic or job because we want become a hero or a myth too.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2015 16:20
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 28-04-2015 à 14:28:58 (S | E)
Bonjour,
non, votre correction n'est pas correcte puisque vous n'avez pas corrigé tout ce que je vous avais indiqué en bleu. Si vous ne modifiez que les corrections où je donne la solution, il reste toutes les autres.
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why we like so ( il serait temps d'apprendre à faire une forme interrogative: modèle: I like tea: What do you like ? Why do you like tea ?)all of this heroes or myths(this est singulier, les noms sont pluriel!)?
So, firstly we will see why they become hero (au pluriel) and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lot of( c'est soit , a lot of, soit lots of) people are considered like heroes but (article indéfini)hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfils a lot of achievements.
As an example a hero in sports, in class we studing(voir remarques sur le présent en ing) on Oscar Pistorius. Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter(verbe transitif) in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete who was felled(abattu?) to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, so the hero in the sports. In the domain of the politics, in class we studing
So we can see to all the domain have many heroes, they made something amazing or extraordinary to become a hero or a myth in
All long in our life we have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we are young the first model were(singulier) your mother or your father but when you grow you have an other hero or model in your favorite domain, for example in music, the cinema and many others. We take him or her in hero, first because we like his moral, physic or his job situation. Secondly because it’s in human nature to take a model to carry on, to an other people(sens??) for try(voir le cours sur pour + verbe dans votre autre sujet) to become like him, so your ideal(sens de cette phrase sans verbe ?).
But a hero for someone isn’t necessarly a hero for an other, because for somebody who likes
In conclusion a hero or a myth is a person who makes something different from
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de leavar, postée le 29-04-2015 à 09:51:56 (S | E)
Merci de m'avoir de nouveau répondu
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de leavar, postée le 29-04-2015 à 15:38:38 (S | E)
Bonjour, cette fois je pense avoir tout corrigé
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why do we like so these heroes or myths?
So, in first time we will see why they become heroes and in second time we will see why we need them.
Lots of people are considered like heroes but a hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfils a lot of achievements. Heroes can accomplish achievements through their profession as we have study in class like firemens or the humanitarian people who go to the country affected by ebola to help a sick people. These people save many human lives everyday, and put their lives in danger everytime. But this type of achievement is also realised by the simple citizens who live an ordinary life since for example when they see somebody else in danger, they help this person and save his life. But they are an other type of hero, the people who became heroes thanks to their achievements or were an emblematic person in their domain, in the domain of sports or the domain of politics.
As an example a hero in sports, in class we have study on Oscar Pistorius. Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete who was amputate to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, a hero in sports. In the domain of politics, in class we have study on a picture of Barack Obama, in this document Barack Obama is represented as a very charismatic man. This man was the first black president in the USA. So this man was a model of sucess because before in the USA there was a lot of segregation, black people were always persecuted, and there were many ban against them. As for example in the bus, black people can’t sit in the front part of the bus. So the fact that Barack Obama was elected, constitute an advancement into the war against segregation.
So we can see in all the domain have many heroes, they made something amazing or extraordinary to become a hero or a myth in their domain of predilection.
All long in our life we have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we are young the first model was your mother or your father but when you grow you have an other hero or model in your favorite domain, for example in music, the cinema and many others. We take him or her as model, first because we like his moral, physical or his job situation. Secondly because it’s in human nature to take a model to carry on.
But a hero for someone isn’t necessarly a hero for an other, because for somebody who likes the music his hero was certainly situated into music domain. In fact the heroes depend on your interest.
In conclusion a hero or a myth is a person who makes something different from another people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, find a new technology, make a discovery to save many lives. We need them because we dream of becoming like them and have the same moral, physical or job because we want to become a hero or a myth too.
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 29-04-2015 à 23:37:27 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
hélas non....
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why do we like so these heroes or myths?
So, in first time we will see why they become heroes and in second time we will see why we need them.
Lots of people are considered like heroes but a hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpfull and who fulfills a lot of achievements. Heroes can accomplish achievements through their professions as we have study(participe passé) in class like firemens(aïe!) or
As an example a hero in sports, in class we have study(participe passé, et en fait un prétérit irait mieux) a text about
So we can see in all the domains,(mettez l'expression il y a ici)
All long in our life we have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we are(prétérit) young the first model was your mother or your(avec we comme sujet, "notre" irait quand même mieux, ou alors mettez you comme sujet)) father but when you grow you have an other hero or model in your favorite domain, for example in music, the cinema and many others. We take him or her as a model, first because we like his moral, physical (est un adjectif, vous voulez dire his looks?) or his job situation. Secondly because it’s in human nature to take a model to carry on.
But a hero for someone isn’t necessarly a hero for an other, because for somebody who likes
In conclusion a hero or a myth is a person who makes something different from other people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, find a new technology, make a discovery to save many lives. We need them because we dream of becoming like them and have the same moral, physical or job because we want to become a hero or a myth too.
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de leavar, postée le 30-04-2015 à 14:58:13 (S | E)
Bonjour, je pense avoir corrigé toute les fautes
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why do we like these heroes or myths?
So, firstly we will see why they become heroes and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lots of people are considered like heroes but a hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpful and who fulfills a lot of achievements. Heroes can accomplish achievements through their professions as we have studied in class like firemen or humanitarian people who go to the country affected by ebola to help sick people. These people save many human lives everyday, and put their lives in danger everytime. But this type of achievement is also realised by the simple citizens who live an ordinary life since for example when they see somebody else in danger, they help this person and save his life. But they are an other type of hero, the people who became heroes thanks to their achievements or were an emblematic person in their domain, in the domain of sports or the domain of politics.
As an example a hero in sports, in class we have studied a text about Oscar Pistorius. Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of sucess, a hero in sports. In the domain of politics, in class we have saw on a picture of Barack Obama, in this document Barack Obama is represented as a very charismatic man. This man was the first black president in the USA. So this man was a model of success because before in the USA there was a lot of segregation, black people were always persecuted, and there were many ban against them. As for example in the bus, black people couldn’t sit in the front part of the bus. So the fact that Barack Obama was elected, constitutes an advancement into the war against segregation.
So we can see in all the domains, there are many heroes, they made something amazing or extraordinary to become a hero or a myth in their domain of predilection.
In our life we have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we were young the first model was our mother or our father but when we grow we have an other hero or model in our favorite domain, for example in music, the cinema and many others. We take him or her as a model, first because we like his moral, his looks or his job situation. Secondly because it’s in human nature to take a model to carry on.
But a hero for someone isn’t necessarly a hero for an other, because for somebody who likes music his hero was certainly situated into the music domain. In fact the heroes depend on your interest.
In conclusion a hero or a myth is a person who makes something different from other people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, find a new technology, make a discovery to save many lives. We need them because we dream of becoming like them and have the same moral, his looks or job because we want to become a hero or a myth too.
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 30-04-2015 à 15:27:35 (S | E)
Hello,
I’m going to talk about the notion myths and heroes. A myth can be defined as a story about gods or heroes, it can be a popular belief or a tradition or a false notion. A hero can be a mythological figure, a person who is admired for his or her achievements, a superhero or maybe a role model or an icon.
Why do we like these heroes or myths?
So, firstly we will see why they become heroes and secondly we will see why we need them.
Lots of people are considered like heroes but a hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpful and who fulfills a lot of achievements. Heroes can accomplish achievements through their professions as we have studied in class like firemen or humanitarian people who go to the country affected by ebola to help sick people. These people save many human lives everyday, and put their lives in danger everytime. But this type of achievement is also realised by the simple citizens who live an ordinary life since for example when they see somebody else in danger, they help this person and save his life. But they are(il y a ?) an other type of hero, the people who became heroes thanks to their achievements or were an emblematic person in their domain, in the domain of sports or the domain of politics.
As an example of a hero in sports, in class we (have) studied a text about Oscar Pistorius. Pistorius was a runner who was the first disabled athlete to enter in able-bodied international competition and he became the first disabled athlete to win an able bodied world track medal. So this man was a model of success, a hero in sports. In the domain of politics, in class we have saw(horreur! we saw!)
So we can see in all
In our life we have a model and we want to become like him or her, when we were young the first model was our mother or our father but when we grow we have an other hero or model in our favorite domain, for example in music, the cinema and many others. We take him or her as a model, first because we like his moral, his looks or his job situation. Secondly because it’s in human nature to take a model to carry on.
But a hero for someone isn’t necessarly a hero for somebody else (an other), because for somebody who likes music his hero was certainly situated into the music domain. In fact the heroes you choose depend on your interest.
In conclusion a hero or a myth is a person who makes something different from other people, he can save a life, defend his ideal, find a new technology, make a discovery to save many lives. We need them because we dream of becoming like them and have the same moral, their looks or job because we want to become a hero or a myth too.
Réponse: Oral/mythes et héros de leavar, postée le 30-04-2015 à 16:08:31 (S | E)
Re-bonjour, merci énormément pour les corrections de mon travail
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