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Message de haika57 posté le 03-05-2015 à 17:33:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai mon oral d'anglais dans quelques jours et 3 sujets à travailler et comme mon niveau est très bas, pourriez-vous m'aider pour les corrections? Merci pour vos réponses.
ARSENAL FC
What is Arsenal FC ?
Arsenal FC is an English Football Club, which is lacated in North London.
Forn home matches their outfit is red and white, for away matches it is yellow.
They are sponsored by the U.A.E Airline Company (Fly Emirates).
They are known as the Gunners
History
Arsenal FC was formed in eighteen eighty-six (1886).
Their first stadium was known as Highbury.
The first professional club Manager was Thomas Mitchell in eighteen eighthy-one.
The current coach is Arséne Wenger, he has been at the club since nineteen ninety-six (1996).
He is the coach who has won the most of all the club’s success story.
Emirates Stadium
It is called Emirates Stadium because the team is sponsored by the famous Airline Company, Fly Emirates.
The stadium was built in July two thousand six (2006).
It can accommodate up to sixty thousand three hundred thirty five spectators.
It is the fifth Football Stadium in the United Kingdom.
Its construction cost is three hundred and ninety millions (390 millions) livres sterling.
The Club Arsenal FC gained many trophies
Thirteen (13) Premier League title
Eleven (11) FA Cup
Two (2) League Cup
Thirteen (13) FA Community Schield
On (1) UEFA Cup
On (1) Mercantile Credit Centenary Trophy
On (1) Inter Cities Fairs Cup
But the club won no titles between two thousand five (2005) and two thousand fourteen (2014).
The last major Trophy was the two thousand five (2005) FA Cup against Manchester United.
Merci beaucoup de votre aide
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 17:56
Message de haika57 posté le 03-05-2015 à 17:33:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai mon oral d'anglais dans quelques jours et 3 sujets à travailler et comme mon niveau est très bas, pourriez-vous m'aider pour les corrections? Merci pour vos réponses.
ARSENAL FC
What is Arsenal FC ?
Arsenal FC is an English Football Club, which is lacated in North London.
Forn home matches their outfit is red and white, for away matches it is yellow.
They are sponsored by the U.A.E Airline Company (Fly Emirates).
They are known as the Gunners
History
Arsenal FC was formed in eighteen eighty-six (1886).
Their first stadium was known as Highbury.
The first professional club Manager was Thomas Mitchell in eighteen eighthy-one.
The current coach is Arséne Wenger, he has been at the club since nineteen ninety-six (1996).
He is the coach who has won the most of all the club’s success story.
Emirates Stadium
It is called Emirates Stadium because the team is sponsored by the famous Airline Company, Fly Emirates.
The stadium was built in July two thousand six (2006).
It can accommodate up to sixty thousand three hundred thirty five spectators.
It is the fifth Football Stadium in the United Kingdom.
Its construction cost is three hundred and ninety millions (390 millions) livres sterling.
The Club Arsenal FC gained many trophies
Thirteen (13) Premier League title
Eleven (11) FA Cup
Two (2) League Cup
Thirteen (13) FA Community Schield
On (1) UEFA Cup
On (1) Mercantile Credit Centenary Trophy
On (1) Inter Cities Fairs Cup
But the club won no titles between two thousand five (2005) and two thousand fourteen (2014).
The last major Trophy was the two thousand five (2005) FA Cup against Manchester United.
Merci beaucoup de votre aide
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 17:56
Réponse: Oral/Arsenal FC de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 17:45:18 (S | E)
Bonjour,
d'après votre fiche,vous passez le bac pro à 50 ans.
Pas beaucoup d'erreurs dans ce texte, à part les dates écrites "à l'américaine". Ce n'est pas que ce soit faux mais de ce côté de l'atlantique, on dit plutôt in two thousand and fourteen que in two thousand fourteen.
erreurs en bleu, corrections en rouge.
ARSENAL FC
What is Arsenal FC ?
Arsenal FC is an English Football Club, which is lacated located in North London.
For home matches their outfit is red and white, for away matches it is yellow.
They are sponsored by the U.A.E Airline Company (Fly Emirates).
They are known as the Gunners
History
Arsenal FC was formed in eighteen eighty-six (1886).
Their first stadium was known as Highbury.
The first professional club Manager was Thomas Mitchell in eighteen eighty-one.
The current coach is Arséne Wenger, he has been at the club since nineteen ninety-six (1996).
He is the coach who has won the most ****(il a gagné le plus de quoi?) of all the club’s success story.
Emirates Stadium
It is called Emirates Stadium because the team is sponsored by the famous Airline Company, Fly Emirates.
The stadium was built in July two thousand and six (2006).
It can accommodate up to sixty thousand three hundred and thirty five spectators.
It is the fifth Football Stadium in the United Kingdom.
Its construction cost is three hundred and ninety millions(pas de s aux adjectifs numéraux) (390 millions) livres(à mettre en anglais) sterling.
The Club Arsenal FC(ordre des mots, FC signifie déja football club, on dit par exemple Toulon Rugby Club) gained many trophies
Thirteen (13) Premier League titles
Eleven (11) FA Cups
Two (2) League Cups
Thirteen (13) FA Community Shields
One (1) UEFA Cup
One (1) Mercantile Credit Centenary Trophy
One (1) Inter Cities Fairs Cup
But the club won no titles between two thousand and five (2005) and two thousand and fourteen (2014).
The last major Trophy was the two thousand and five (2005) FA Cup against Manchester United.
Réponse: Oral/Arsenal FC de haika57, postée le 03-05-2015 à 18:46:08 (S | E)
Bonjour Gerondif,
et oui passer un bac pro à 50 ans ça paraît bizarre, mais reconversion pro oblige, pas le choix.
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide.
Réponse: Oral/Arsenal FC de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 18:54:10 (S | E)
Hello,
Ca n'était pas une critique!Parfois, les fiches sont fantaisistes. Si le bac pro vous permet d'accéder à des emplois et une grille de salaire supérieure, tant mieux pour vous.
Je ne sais pas si ce genre de texte est suffisamment riche pour l'examen. c'est un peu comme une liste de commissions avec surtout du verbe être.
Vous aurez sans doute ensuite à répondre à quelques questions personnelles qui vaudraient le coup d'être préparées.
Réponse: Oral/Arsenal FC de haika57, postée le 03-05-2015 à 20:06:59 (S | E)
re bonjour,
non je ne l'ai pas pris pour une critique, c'était juste une explication (vu mon âge),
pour ce qui est du texte, c'est juste pour me permettre de ne pas me 'manger une grosse gamelle', le rattrapage se fera sur les matières pro.
Encore un grand merci.
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