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Message de corentin28 posté le 14-05-2015 à 11:02:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous corriger ma synthèse s'il vous plait ? Mon oral est lundi ..
Merci pour vos réponses.
Spaces and exchanges
I'm going to talk about the notion spaces and exchanges. . First of all I would like to give a definition of this notion: an exchange is the act of giving or receiving something in substitution for something else. Actually these exchanges can take several forms: economic, cultural, movement of people. These exchanges take place around the world. Exchanges can be movement of people, like immigration, through the world. In class, we have seen several documents about this notion, and I’m going to talk about the immigration in the world. What drives people to leave their country to go and live in another country and there are only advantages? To attempt to answer at this question, I will help myself of three documents studied in class: “Melting pot or salad bowl”, “The New World” and “The American dream”. At first we will see, why people want to leave their country and go live in another country, then we will see immigration’s advantages. And to conclude, we will see immigration’s problem.
To answer at these question, we will try to understand why people want to leave their country and go live in another country. In class, we studied “The New World”. In this text, we can see The Pilgrims, English who left misery and wars in Europe, to go to America and build a united community, on a virgin land, in 1620. This is an early example of immigration. Indeed, in some cases, people want immigrate because there are wars, misery, poverty, famine, in their country. They want to found a new life, a better life.
Thereby, the immigration is an opportunity to build a new life, a better life, in an other space. In class, we have studied “The American dream”. The American dream has long existed, is when an immigrant from scratch, then has a beautiful life. In class, we have seen Ellis Island, the symbol of US immigration. The American dream draws people and drive them to immigrate in America. Indeed, it present many advantages, people can flee misery, poverty, wars and found job, house, car, money, security,.. Thereby, the immigration has many advantages, as have a better life, flee misery, …
However, the immigration haven’t only advantages. Indeed, when you go in an other space, you must adapt yourself instead, for the good of communities and it’s not easier. In class, we have studied “Melting pot or salad bowl”. In this document, we could see the difficulty immigrants integrate in communities. To live in good condition, and maybe reach “the American dream”, immigrants must adapt at local culture, local religion, local life style, local food. It’s difficult for immigrants because they feel that they lose their identity, their culture, whereas no.
The immigration is an opportunity for people which live in poor country, to flee misery, poverty, famine, … and found a better life. In some case, people can reach “The American dream”. But the immigration induces the melange. Indeed, immigrants must adapt at local life style, for the good of communities. So the immigration has many advantages, but we can found problems.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2015 11:45
Message de corentin28 posté le 14-05-2015 à 11:02:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous corriger ma synthèse s'il vous plait ? Mon oral est lundi ..
Merci pour vos réponses.
Spaces and exchanges
I'm going to talk about the notion spaces and exchanges. . First of all I would like to give a definition of this notion: an exchange is the act of giving or receiving something in substitution for something else. Actually these exchanges can take several forms: economic, cultural, movement of people. These exchanges take place around the world. Exchanges can be movement of people, like immigration, through the world. In class, we have seen several documents about this notion, and I’m going to talk about the immigration in the world. What drives people to leave their country to go and live in another country and there are only advantages? To attempt to answer at this question, I will help myself of three documents studied in class: “Melting pot or salad bowl”, “The New World” and “The American dream”. At first we will see, why people want to leave their country and go live in another country, then we will see immigration’s advantages. And to conclude, we will see immigration’s problem.
To answer at these question, we will try to understand why people want to leave their country and go live in another country. In class, we studied “The New World”. In this text, we can see The Pilgrims, English who left misery and wars in Europe, to go to America and build a united community, on a virgin land, in 1620. This is an early example of immigration. Indeed, in some cases, people want immigrate because there are wars, misery, poverty, famine, in their country. They want to found a new life, a better life.
Thereby, the immigration is an opportunity to build a new life, a better life, in an other space. In class, we have studied “The American dream”. The American dream has long existed, is when an immigrant from scratch, then has a beautiful life. In class, we have seen Ellis Island, the symbol of US immigration. The American dream draws people and drive them to immigrate in America. Indeed, it present many advantages, people can flee misery, poverty, wars and found job, house, car, money, security,.. Thereby, the immigration has many advantages, as have a better life, flee misery, …
However, the immigration haven’t only advantages. Indeed, when you go in an other space, you must adapt yourself instead, for the good of communities and it’s not easier. In class, we have studied “Melting pot or salad bowl”. In this document, we could see the difficulty immigrants integrate in communities. To live in good condition, and maybe reach “the American dream”, immigrants must adapt at local culture, local religion, local life style, local food. It’s difficult for immigrants because they feel that they lose their identity, their culture, whereas no.
The immigration is an opportunity for people which live in poor country, to flee misery, poverty, famine, … and found a better life. In some case, people can reach “The American dream”. But the immigration induces the melange. Indeed, immigrants must adapt at local life style, for the good of communities. So the immigration has many advantages, but we can found problems.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2015 11:45
Réponse: Oral/Spaces and exchanges de laure95, postée le 15-05-2015 à 19:14:37 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
-I'm going to talk about the notion (OF) spaces and exchanges. .
- Exchanges can be (A) movement of people
- What drives people to leave their country to go and live in another country and there are only advantages?: drive = conduire une voiture + ARE THERE...?
- To attempt to answer at this question: enlever AT.
-I will help myself of three documents: WITH et non OF
- and go live in another country : enlever GO ou le remplacer par WANT TO.
-To answer at these question
-go live in another country.
-Indeed, in some cases, people want immigrate: want TO immigrate
-is when an immigrant from scratch: où est le sujet de IS?
-and drive.
- Indeed, it present: conjugaison.
- found job: TO FOUND = fonder.
- as have a better life: HAVING.
-Indeed, when you go in an other space: to go TO.
- the difficulty immigrants integrate in communities mal dit.
- immigrants must adapt at local culture: adapt TO.
- whereas no: mal dit.
- and found a better life.
- the melange: mot français.
- adapt at.
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