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Message de senjutsu61 posté le 14-05-2015 à 18:00:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai mes oraux mercredi prochain; je fais des fiches mais je ne sais pas trop comment faire, pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait? Merci beaucoup pour votre attention.
Location and forms of power
In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence the behavior of people. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it.
We are going to concentrate on the British empire and explain :
Firslty, we studied video « rise and fall of britsh empire » , in the video the britsh empire lasting five hundred years, he imposed white supremacy, he have superpower and check a big part of trade for exemple tea, sugar or gold, . It show evolution the british empire.
The white suprematice is falling because world, peoples evolve and exchange, colonies, slaves want equality so the british empire becomes commonwealth, this is organization that defend the humans right, that is for peace and equality, commonwealth is like European union, USA. The british empire exchange from domination to cooperation.
Whereas empire evolve, much people think yet white supremacy and do not accept equality as document « the dark continent » shows a white lady who visite a independant colonies and she insult a black teacher, she thinks superior but teacher defends itself and humiliates white lady.
Indeed today, they exist people thinking to be upper for example hitler and nazis or all racist, this people don't evolve with time and don't accept change, unlike the britsh empire.
The Commonwealth is organisation with 51 countries, the record audio « more about the commonwealt » explains commonwealth is organization based on humains values, offer independance for colonies and other countries, but global population liberate, use english as their walking langage. They recognize the Queen as their head of state. They all participate in the « commonwealth game » similar to the olympic game. When the britsh empire became the commonwealth, world also change because he has big influence on everybody, we lived currently in the peace without inequality and humans rights important.
To finish according to me the British empire is known how to make evolve its domination according to times and is to adapt in change of the world, the people undergoing this domination also have to evolve but this notion does not amount only to the British empire when we speak about place and shape of power one can speak power of the man on woman and the power of the media.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2015 18:24
Message de senjutsu61 posté le 14-05-2015 à 18:00:14 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai mes oraux mercredi prochain; je fais des fiches mais je ne sais pas trop comment faire, pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait? Merci beaucoup pour votre attention.
Location and forms of power
In politics and social science, power is the ability to influence the behavior of people. In order to live together members of a community accept rules, regulations, laws. This helps to create social cohesion but can also lead to conflicts and tensions. Even when authority seems absolute, there are always counter-powers which question it, aim at limiting its excesses and resist it.
We are going to concentrate on the British empire and explain :
Firslty, we studied video « rise and fall of britsh empire » , in the video the britsh empire lasting five hundred years, he imposed white supremacy, he have superpower and check a big part of trade for exemple tea, sugar or gold, . It show evolution the british empire.
The white suprematice is falling because world, peoples evolve and exchange, colonies, slaves want equality so the british empire becomes commonwealth, this is organization that defend the humans right, that is for peace and equality, commonwealth is like European union, USA. The british empire exchange from domination to cooperation.
Whereas empire evolve, much people think yet white supremacy and do not accept equality as document « the dark continent » shows a white lady who visite a independant colonies and she insult a black teacher, she thinks superior but teacher defends itself and humiliates white lady.
Indeed today, they exist people thinking to be upper for example hitler and nazis or all racist, this people don't evolve with time and don't accept change, unlike the britsh empire.
The Commonwealth is organisation with 51 countries, the record audio « more about the commonwealt » explains commonwealth is organization based on humains values, offer independance for colonies and other countries, but global population liberate, use english as their walking langage. They recognize the Queen as their head of state. They all participate in the « commonwealth game » similar to the olympic game. When the britsh empire became the commonwealth, world also change because he has big influence on everybody, we lived currently in the peace without inequality and humans rights important.
To finish according to me the British empire is known how to make evolve its domination according to times and is to adapt in change of the world, the people undergoing this domination also have to evolve but this notion does not amount only to the British empire when we speak about place and shape of power one can speak power of the man on woman and the power of the media.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2015 18:24
Réponse: Oral/Lieux et formes de pouvoir de laure95, postée le 16-05-2015 à 13:38:23 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- Firslty, we studied video: A video.
- he imposed: HE = pour un homme.
- he have superpower: problème de pronom + conjugaison.
-exemple: orthographe.
- It show evolution: il manque THE + conjugaison.
-the british empire: manjuscule à British.
-suprematice: ?
- peoples: pas de "s".
- this is organization: il manque AN.
-that defend: conjugaison.
- the humans right: human rights.
- European union, USA: il manque 2 THE.
- The british empire exchange: pas le bon mot + conjugaison.
-Whereas empire evolve: il faut THE + conjugaison.
-much people: MUCH + SINGULIER.
- think yet white supremacy: mal dit.
- as document: as IN THE document.
- a white lady who visite: orthographe + conjugaison
- a independant: A + MOT COMMENCANT PAR UNE CONSONNE.
- she insult: conjugaison.
- she thinks Superior: SHE IS Superior
- but teacher defends itself: il manque THE + itself ne va pas.
-white lady : THE
- they exist people: THEY + ILS OU ELLES.
- this people: THIS + SINGULIER
-organisation: AN organization
- explains Commonwealth: THAT THE Commonwealth
- organization: il manque AN.
- humains: mot français.
- offer: conjugaison.
- but global population liberate: mal dit.
- langage: orthographe.
- the olympic game: à mettre au pluriel.
-world also change: il manque THE + pas au bon temps.
- because he has big influence: pas le bon pronom.
-humans rights important: mal dit.
-the British empire is known: à mettre au présent.
-is to adapt in change of the world: mal dit.
REVOIR:
- l'utilisation des articles.
- conjugaison présent simple 3è personne du singulier.
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