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Message de slyder59 posté le 20-05-2015 à 15:32:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je passe mon oral d'anglais bientôt et je voudrais vérifier que mes préparations sont bonnes, voici celle de la notion "Espace et Echanges".
Merci de votre aide.
Today, I present you the noction of Spaces and Exchanges. I give you a short definition of Exchanges. An Exchanges is the act of giving, or receiving something in substitution for something else. Today, there are several forms of exchange : economic, with the exchange of goods, the work exchanges, or trading accross borders. The exchange cultural, with the exchange of ideas, information or education. The movements of people with the immigration and gap years. One wonders if it's so easy to discover another country.
To begin, we often leave our country to discover our motherland. The Motherland is the foundation of your country, but we can go somewhere else to discover new things. Every people have a reason to travel, for example, to work, to learn another cultures or languages, to immigrate, or simply to change her life. So a gap year is very interesting ! Meaning we take a year off to see the world or in a particular country. Now, there are programs to promote study abroad. Since 1987, in European, there is a program like this, the Program Erasmus. This is an exchange student lasting between 3 months and 1 year.
However, they are not only positive, when you leave home country to discover another country, you can face discrimination. Integrate a new country can be very difficult. The opinions are shared by people, you realize that opinions between girls and boys are differents. Moreover it's possible that your new home is not as your expect. So you may regret it. You wish to find a country that accept you as you are. But this is not always the case. And when you leave of your country, you have to leave all your friends, your family, everything you love. This can be difficult for some people, so they cry, they are afraid of this new life, and finally, they don't want to leave.
To conclude, it's not so easy to discover another country. This must be done for good reasons, and choose the best country where you will not alone and you will not regret it.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-05-2015 18:14
Message de slyder59 posté le 20-05-2015 à 15:32:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je passe mon oral d'anglais bientôt et je voudrais vérifier que mes préparations sont bonnes, voici celle de la notion "Espace et Echanges".
Merci de votre aide.
Today, I present you the noction of Spaces and Exchanges. I give you a short definition of Exchanges. An Exchanges is the act of giving, or receiving something in substitution for something else. Today, there are several forms of exchange : economic, with the exchange of goods, the work exchanges, or trading accross borders. The exchange cultural, with the exchange of ideas, information or education. The movements of people with the immigration and gap years. One wonders if it's so easy to discover another country.
To begin, we often leave our country to discover our motherland. The Motherland is the foundation of your country, but we can go somewhere else to discover new things. Every people have a reason to travel, for example, to work, to learn another cultures or languages, to immigrate, or simply to change her life. So a gap year is very interesting ! Meaning we take a year off to see the world or in a particular country. Now, there are programs to promote study abroad. Since 1987, in European, there is a program like this, the Program Erasmus. This is an exchange student lasting between 3 months and 1 year.
However, they are not only positive, when you leave home country to discover another country, you can face discrimination. Integrate a new country can be very difficult. The opinions are shared by people, you realize that opinions between girls and boys are differents. Moreover it's possible that your new home is not as your expect. So you may regret it. You wish to find a country that accept you as you are. But this is not always the case. And when you leave of your country, you have to leave all your friends, your family, everything you love. This can be difficult for some people, so they cry, they are afraid of this new life, and finally, they don't want to leave.
To conclude, it's not so easy to discover another country. This must be done for good reasons, and choose the best country where you will not alone and you will not regret it.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-05-2015 18:14
Réponse: Oral/Espaces et Echanges de here4u, postée le 20-05-2015 à 20:01:09 (S | E)
hello !
Puff... I'm coming!
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underlined = clumsy !
Today, I present you the noction of Spaces and Exchanges. I give you a short definition of Exchanges. An Exchanges is the act of giving, or receiving something in substitution for something else. Today, there are several forms of exchangeS : economic, with the exchange of goods, the work exchanges, or trading accross borders. The exchangeS cultural(word order!), with the exchange of ideas, information or education. The movements of people with the immigration and gap years. One wonders if it's so easy to discover another country.
To begin, we often leave our country to discover our motherland(??? not clear!). The Motherland is the foundation of your country, but we can go somewhere else to discover new things(not clearer...). Every people have a reason to travel, for example, to work, to learn another cultures or languages, to immigrate, or simply to change her life. So a gap year is very interesting ! Meaning we take a year off to see the world or TO LIVE in a particular country. Now, there are programs to promote study abroad. Since 1987, in European, there is (tense) a program like this, the(1) Program(3) Erasmus(2). This is an exchange student lasting between 3 months and 1 year.
However, they (??? )are not only positive, when you leave your home country to discover another country, you can face discrimination.(??) Integrate a new country can be very difficult. The opinions are shared by people, you realize that opinions between girls and boys are differents
. Moreover it's possible that your new home is not as your expect. (very clumsy => use a modal + wrong tense) So you may regret it. You wish to find a country that accept you as you are. But this is not always the case. And when you leave To conclude, it's not so easy to discover another country. This must be done for good reasons, and XXXXX choose the best country where you will not XX (verb?) alone and you will not regret it.
Réponse: Oral/Espaces et Echanges de slyder59, postée le 20-05-2015 à 22:21:09 (S | E)
Merci de votre aide ! :-)
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