Article/ fast food

Article/ fast food
Message de louislouislouis posté le 23-05-2015 à 23:10:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je dois écrire un article de journal sur les fast food en nde; j'ai écrit déjà quelques passages mais pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

India’s Fast-foods competing with Mc Donald’s
Jumbo King, Mumbai’s biggest vada pav fast-food chain, founded in 2001, is now becoming a high competitor for american junk food.
The story begin when Dheeraj Gupta and his wife Reeta, both native from India, came to London and realised that fast-food industry had a huge success in european countries and could also worked in India. They opened their first restaurant in 2001, in Malad (a northern Mumbai suburb).
Worried to adapt to the different local contexts, Mc Donald’s be soon going to open two totally vegetarian restaurants in India. That’s why; Jumbo King is in permanent competition with fast-food giant. Only, United Pizza’s Khwaja sees it another way: “The real competitor for Jumbo King is not McDonald’s but the man selling vada pav on the roadside.”
Today, Jumbo King’s challenge is getting the money together for expansion, indeed the owners of India’s fast food hope to become more important than Mc Donald’s.
Yet Jumbo King will manage you he to stand out in other countries? Will have the owners of the fast food to suggest a new menu?

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2015 07:24

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Réponse: Article/ fast food de louislouislouis, postée le 24-05-2015 à 11:00:31 (S | E)
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît ? =) merci d'avance (je dois le rendre à ma prof ce soir)

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2015 14:34

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Réponse: Article/ fast food de here4u, postée le 24-05-2015 à 11:15:19 (S | E)
Hello !
C'est 'mal' d'attendre le dernier moment pour faire son travail ... et de faire travailler les bonnes volontés pendant un 'pont'!! Bon ! C'est parti !

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India’s Fast-foods competing with Mc Donald’s
Jumbo King, Mumbai’s biggest 'vada pav fast-food chain', founded in 2001, is now becoming a high competitor for american junk food.
The story begin when Dheeraj Gupta and his wife Reeta, both native from India, came to London and realised that XXX fast-food industry had a huge success in european countries and could also worked in India. They opened their first restaurant in 2001, in Malad (a northern Mumbai suburb).
Worried to adapt to the different local contexts, Mc Donald’s be(what's this?) soon going to open two totally vegetarian restaurants in India. That’s why; Jumbo King is in permanent competition with fast-food giant.(plural or put an article before the noun ...) Only, United Pizza’s Khwaja sees it another way: “The real competitor for Jumbo King is not McDonald’s but the man selling vada pav on the roadside.”
Today, Jumbo King’s challenge is getting the money together for expansion, indeed the owners of India’s fast food hope (to) they'll become more important?? than Mc Donald’s.
Yet Jumbo King will manage you he to stand out??? in other countries?(If it is an interrogative, you have to start the whole sentence again!) Will have the owners of the fast food to suggest a new menu?(idem... word order!)

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Réponse: Article/ fast food de louislouislouis, postée le 24-05-2015 à 12:15:47 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Merci pour votre réponse.

Fast-food in India competing with Mc Donald’s
Jumbo King, Mumbai’s biggest vada pav fast-food chain, founded in 2001, is now becoming a high competitor for American junk food.

The story began when Dheeraj Gupta and his wife Reeta, both native from India, came to London and realized that fast-food industry had a huge success in European countries and could also work in India. They opened their first restaurant in 2001, in Malad (a northern Mumbai suburb).

Vada pav, their first idea, is a popular vegetarian menu because Indian people don't eat beef. In India cow is sacred.
A Jumbo King vada pav is composed of a potato fritter in a bread bun. Potatoes are spiced commonly with chillies, garlic, mustard, asafoetida, turmeric and accompanied by one or more chutneys.

Worried to adapt to the different local contexts, Mc Donald’s will soon open two totally vegetarian restaurants in India. That’s why; Jumbo King is in permanent competition with giant fast-food. Only, United Pizza’s Khwaja sees it another way: “The real competitor for Jumbo King is not McDonald’s but the man selling vada pav on the roadside.”

Today, Jumbo King’s challenge is raising money for expansion, indeed the owners of India’s fast food hope to they’ll become more important than Mc Donald’s.
Yet will Jumbo King manage developing in other countries? Will the owners of the fast food have to suggest a new menu?

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2015 14:38
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