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Message de rominai25 posté le 15-06-2015 à 12:44:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour savoir si les réponses que j'ai données aux Questions H , I et bientôt l'expression écrite que je suis train de faire sont correctes. Ne sachant pas si on peut mettre un lien vers le sujet et pour vous éviter un gros copié-collé du texte je vous renvoie au sujet anglais Bac S métropole 2014
Merci d'avance de votre aide.

Voici donc mes réponses :
H. In your own words briefly compare and contrast Anne Smithfork’s and Miles Heller’s lifestyle choices.
This two characters are very different, but the basic situation is the same. They're poors but one of both work at a company. And this man Anne one day knew a unexecepted change in his life, his friend help him to developp his company on the public market. Although it's not the case for Miles who choose to live a simple life and don't search to have a better life, he was very lazy. Nevertheless they've hobbies, Anne likes invent game and Miles likes read books, the both have in something. We can note that there is a discreppency between one who loves new technologies and one who enjoys the simple things like reading a book.

I. Which of Bruce Smithfork and Miles Heller has more control over his life? Justify with elements from the text.
For miles yes, he has more control over his life because he takes decision : « He knows that he will not stay in Florida much longer, that the moment is coming when he will feel the need to move on again ».
For Anne it's different, because it's was the hazard, he didn't think that he'll be a millionaire the next day.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-06-2015 19:16

Réponse: Correction/Bac S-LV1 de gerondif, postée le 15-06-2015 à 13:01:36 (S | E)
Bonjour,
pas mal d'erreurs en fait, la maîtrise des conjugaisons est à revoir, et je ne sais pas si vous réfléchissez avant d'écrire parce que pour vous Anne est un homme.(A moins que ce soit vraiment le cas, je n'ai pas vu le sujet)

H. In your own words briefly compare and contrast Anne Smithfork’s and Miles Heller’s lifestyle choices.

This(pluriel) two characters are very different, but the basic situation is the same. They're poors(adjectif invariable) but one of both(l'un d'eux) work(le s du présent) at a company. And this man Anne(vous êtes sûr?) one day knew an unexpected change in his life, his friend help(le s du présent ou mieux le ed du prétérit) him to developp his company on the public market. Although(ne semble pas utile ici) it's not the case for Miles who choose(le s du présent) to live a simple life and don't search(doesn't + autre verbe, to search, c'est fouiller quelqu'un) to have a better life, he was very lazy. Nevertheless they've (ne pas abréger le verbe lexical have)hobbies, Anne likes to invent games and Miles likes to read books, ~~the~~ both have in something(ne veut rien dire. Both have something in common). We can note that there is a discrepency between one who loves new technologies and one who enjoys the simple things like reading a book.

I. Which of Bruce Smithfork and Miles Heller(alors, pourquoi parler d' Anne) has more control over his life? Justify with elements from the text.

For miles yes(difficile de répondre oui à la question "lequel"), he has more control over his life because he takes decision(on dit to make a decision) : « He knows that he will not stay in Florida much longer, that the moment is coming when he will feel the need to move on again ».
For Anne it's different, because it's was the hazard(signifie danger), he didn't(present) think that he'll be a millionaire the next day.

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