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Message de dreamtea posté le 24-09-2015 à 12:52:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais savoir si mon texte est juste d'un point de vue grammatical, mais également au niveau du sens, si vous avez des critiques, des conseils, n'hésitez pas.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
STARTING A CAREER IN FASHION
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To begin with the following ways of entry into the fashion industry in France, I would say it’s plenty difficult, in the first time about the internships because often house of fashion industry are busy or they refuse to reveal her slide to young unknown. Moreover some house of fashion are hurry, pressed and they haven’t time to talk with the student, and the trainee can be reduced to getting coffee, making photocopies or even sweep. But if we have little chance we can learn many things and open opportunities very interesting for the futur professional . So internships can be a great experience for deepen our skills or our orientation professional.
About the mentoring programmes in France, I things it’s very attractive for young design. This experience can be very rewarding, and it’s can initiate a career, and generate new talent in the fashion industry.
Finally about the competition, in my judgment it’s necessary to have experience, originality and courage because there are many selection and many talents.
But if we have chance to be selected it’s a real dream ! We can earn money, meet professional, find a good job and even travel so it’s very nice! But in France there are less competitions at Italy for example.
About the reality show I think it’s not really a good vision in France , and I confesses I prefer talent contest or even internships for started in our career.
So in France Internships are beter experiences for initiate his career professional furthermore we can see if we love really this job or not.
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I’ve ever participated in an internship’s but not in the fashion industry so I prefer answer at the next question.
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For me, the competition is the best experience to start her career, because if the edition chose your project that means our profile corresponds 100% at their request so it’s about our personality, our univers, and they love that. Finally it’s happiness !
Futhermore, often, our work it’s paid, and we can meet personality really interesting for our personal and professional experience.
It’s can be really rewarding if we are selected, that means our work is favourable and we can improve his trust.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-09-2015 13:17
Message de dreamtea posté le 24-09-2015 à 12:52:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais savoir si mon texte est juste d'un point de vue grammatical, mais également au niveau du sens, si vous avez des critiques, des conseils, n'hésitez pas.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
STARTING A CAREER IN FASHION
-1-
To begin with the following ways of entry into the fashion industry in France, I would say it’s plenty difficult, in the first time about the internships because often house of fashion industry are busy or they refuse to reveal her slide to young unknown. Moreover some house of fashion are hurry, pressed and they haven’t time to talk with the student, and the trainee can be reduced to getting coffee, making photocopies or even sweep. But if we have little chance we can learn many things and open opportunities very interesting for the futur professional . So internships can be a great experience for deepen our skills or our orientation professional.
About the mentoring programmes in France, I things it’s very attractive for young design. This experience can be very rewarding, and it’s can initiate a career, and generate new talent in the fashion industry.
Finally about the competition, in my judgment it’s necessary to have experience, originality and courage because there are many selection and many talents.
But if we have chance to be selected it’s a real dream ! We can earn money, meet professional, find a good job and even travel so it’s very nice! But in France there are less competitions at Italy for example.
About the reality show I think it’s not really a good vision in France , and I confesses I prefer talent contest or even internships for started in our career.
So in France Internships are beter experiences for initiate his career professional furthermore we can see if we love really this job or not.
-2-
I’ve ever participated in an internship’s but not in the fashion industry so I prefer answer at the next question.
-3-
For me, the competition is the best experience to start her career, because if the edition chose your project that means our profile corresponds 100% at their request so it’s about our personality, our univers, and they love that. Finally it’s happiness !
Futhermore, often, our work it’s paid, and we can meet personality really interesting for our personal and professional experience.
It’s can be really rewarding if we are selected, that means our work is favourable and we can improve his trust.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-09-2015 13:17
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