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Message de allya98 posté le 21-10-2015 à 19:04:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pourriez-vous me corriger ce texte s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
As the honourable poet and writer Maya Angelou said, a hero is “any person really intent on making this a better place for all people”, I think a hero is a person who is admired by the others for his skills, success or fight. Heroes have always existed, the oldest dating back to ancient Greece. Heroes are quite different to myths which symbolize a story that may or may not be true and surrounded by an amazing esteem. All the modern societies have their own heroes and myths that represent what the common people dream for, but what are their purposes?
My presentation will fall into three parts. In the first place, I’ll show you that the myths can bring us hope and happiness. Then, I’ll highlight the fact that the heroes can represent models for common people. Finally, we'll see the heroes who fight for the common good. Each part will be illustrate with different examples.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-10-2015 21:35
Message de allya98 posté le 21-10-2015 à 19:04:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pourriez-vous me corriger ce texte s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
As the honourable poet and writer Maya Angelou said, a hero is “any person really intent on making this a better place for all people”, I think a hero is a person who is admired by the others for his skills, success or fight. Heroes have always existed, the oldest dating back to ancient Greece. Heroes are quite different to myths which symbolize a story that may or may not be true and surrounded by an amazing esteem. All the modern societies have their own heroes and myths that represent what the common people dream for, but what are their purposes?
My presentation will fall into three parts. In the first place, I’ll show you that the myths can bring us hope and happiness. Then, I’ll highlight the fact that the heroes can represent models for common people. Finally, we'll see the heroes who fight for the common good. Each part will be illustrate with different examples.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-10-2015 21:35
Réponse: Texte/héros de laure95, postée le 24-10-2015 à 18:25:22 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- different to: pas la bonne préposition.
- Each part will be illustrate: voix passive: BE CONJUGUE + PARTICIPE PASSE DU VERBE.
Réponse: Texte/héros de gerondif, postée le 24-10-2015 à 19:01:39 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu
As the honourable poet and writer Maya Angelou said, a hero is “any person really intent on making this a better place for all people”, I think a hero is a person who is admired by the others for his skills, success or fight. Heroes have always existed, the oldest dating back to ancient Greece. Heroes are quite different to myths which symbolize a story that may or may not be true and surrounded by an amazing esteem. All the modern societies have their own heroes and myths that represent what the common people dream for, but what are their purposes?
My presentation will fall into three parts. In the first place, I’ll show you that the myths can bring us hope and happiness. Then, I’ll highlight the fact that the heroes can represent models for common people. Finally, we'll see the heroes who fight for the common good. Each part will be illustrate(participe passé en ed) with different (various) examples.
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