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Message de ohhnaeqo posté le 01-11-2015 à 20:16:13 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai fait un "essay" sur le rêve américain,la question est : Est-ce que le rêve américain existe encore aujourd'hui?
J'aimerais savoir si mon idée est intéressante et au passage les petites erreurs , s'il vous plaît ! ;)
Merci pour vos réponses.
The idea of the «American Dream» is an idea from the « unanimous declaration of the thirteen united States of America » by Thomas Jefferson. He said : « We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of Happiness »
So,to sum up,this is the idea that if you're determinated,courageous,and hard-worker , you should be succesful. This idea has evolved to a right,the right to be «at the pursuit of hapiness »This is the reason why a lot of immigrants chosed the Unites States as their new country. You don't necessary need skills to have a job.But today,i can say that this idea don't exist anymore.With the high unemployment,the crisis,and the level of high qualifications required :find a good job,which could give you all you need to be « happy »,is really hard.For example,if the students have the money to pay the University,they were given an advantage over the poors students. Finally,the american dream doesn't have the same definition as before..The new definition should be «if you're rich,you should be succesful.»
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-11-2015 21:13
Message de ohhnaeqo posté le 01-11-2015 à 20:16:13 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai fait un "essay" sur le rêve américain,la question est : Est-ce que le rêve américain existe encore aujourd'hui?
J'aimerais savoir si mon idée est intéressante et au passage les petites erreurs , s'il vous plaît ! ;)
Merci pour vos réponses.
The idea of the «American Dream» is an idea from the « unanimous declaration of the thirteen united States of America » by Thomas Jefferson. He said : « We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of Happiness »
So,to sum up,this is the idea that if you're determinated,courageous,and hard-worker , you should be succesful. This idea has evolved to a right,the right to be «at the pursuit of hapiness »This is the reason why a lot of immigrants chosed the Unites States as their new country. You don't necessary need skills to have a job.But today,i can say that this idea don't exist anymore.With the high unemployment,the crisis,and the level of high qualifications required :find a good job,which could give you all you need to be « happy »,is really hard.For example,if the students have the money to pay the University,they were given an advantage over the poors students. Finally,the american dream doesn't have the same definition as before..The new definition should be «if you're rich,you should be succesful.»
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-11-2015 21:13
Réponse: Essai/le rêve américain de laure95, postée le 03-11-2015 à 14:35:42 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- determinated: DETERMINED.
- hard-worker: HARD WORKING.
- hapiness: orthographe.
- this idea don't exist anymore: conjugaison.
- find a good job: mettre TO devant find.
- the poors students: pas de 's' à un adjectif.
Good, but you can develop more giving detailed examples.
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