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Message de mistercocoa posté le 11-01-2016 à 00:28:50 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous,
J'ai une petite biographie à faire d'Ibrahim Fakhri en anglais. Cependant, je ne suis pas tout à fait sûr de la tournure des phrases. Si l'un de vous pouvait y jeter un coup d'œil, ce serait génial !
Merci d'avance.
Ibrahim Fakhri is a young Syrian artist. He left Syria when he was a child and lives in Oxford since 2004. His main goal is to communicate about what is happening in Syria, but he doesn’t want to talk about the war as many journalists do. Indeed, he wants to show to everyone how are living the families in Syria, he wants to show us the life in this country is very different since the war has begun. Ibrahim Fakhri collected near 1,500 milk bottles in order to represent each days happening of that war. What is more, he adds a new bottle to the installation every day the war is continuing.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-01-2016 07:28
Message de mistercocoa posté le 11-01-2016 à 00:28:50 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous,
J'ai une petite biographie à faire d'Ibrahim Fakhri en anglais. Cependant, je ne suis pas tout à fait sûr de la tournure des phrases. Si l'un de vous pouvait y jeter un coup d'œil, ce serait génial !
Merci d'avance.
Ibrahim Fakhri is a young Syrian artist. He left Syria when he was a child and lives in Oxford since 2004. His main goal is to communicate about what is happening in Syria, but he doesn’t want to talk about the war as many journalists do. Indeed, he wants to show to everyone how are living the families in Syria, he wants to show us the life in this country is very different since the war has begun. Ibrahim Fakhri collected near 1,500 milk bottles in order to represent each days happening of that war. What is more, he adds a new bottle to the installation every day the war is continuing.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-01-2016 07:28
Réponse: Aide /biographie de gerondif, postée le 11-01-2016 à 10:19:59 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
Ibrahim Fakhri is a young Syrian artist. He left Syria when he was a child and lives(present perfect avec since) in Oxford since 2004. His main goal is to communicate about what is happening in Syria, but he doesn’t want to (merely)talk about the war as many journalists do(vous voulez dire comme (comparaison)tant d'autres journalistes, utilisez like so many other journalists). Indeed (un peu pompeux et convenu,j'aurais mis really ou actually devant le verbe) he wants to show to everyone how are living(à placer derrière Syria) the families in Syria, he wants to show us that the life in this country is(present perfect avec since) very different since the war has begun(prétérit). Ibrahim Fakhri collected nearly 1,500 milk bottles in order to represent each
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