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Message de picaxe posté le 27-01-2016 à 16:25:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait? Je vous en remercie d'avance.
A new drama happened today in New-Mexico’s desert. Illegals migrants were found dead while trying to cross the border. Fortunately, one migrant, Candido, was rescued by a journalist who were investing in this hostile environment. He is currently in a state of shock but his testimony is very interesting to understand what happened.
“Good morning Candido, why did you choose to come here, in the USA? Did you know all the risks?”
“Well, I knew that crossing the border illegally was risky but I wanted to fulfil my dream. I wanted to experience the American dream. “
“Can you explain what happened, why all these migrants died?”
“We were a group of Mexicans migrants. We paid several thousand dollars to American smugglers to cross the Rio Grande. We had to be transported by truck to a city near the border. Then we had to disappear in the American society. However, things went horribly wrong after a few hours. The truck broke down and we were stranded by the smugglers. They were ruthless, cunning and unscrupulous. We were in desertic land without food and water. The migrants started to die after a few hours of wandering in the desert under a burning heat. Even my sister Manuela died of thirst.”
Illegal immigration remains a hotly contested issue as the 2016 presidential campaigns get underway. We have to act know and we have to pass new laws to find a way to help migrants.
Adrien Weill, The New York Times, June 2015
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-01-2016 23:29
Message de picaxe posté le 27-01-2016 à 16:25:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait? Je vous en remercie d'avance.
A new drama happened today in New-Mexico’s desert. Illegals migrants were found dead while trying to cross the border. Fortunately, one migrant, Candido, was rescued by a journalist who were investing in this hostile environment. He is currently in a state of shock but his testimony is very interesting to understand what happened.
“Good morning Candido, why did you choose to come here, in the USA? Did you know all the risks?”
“Well, I knew that crossing the border illegally was risky but I wanted to fulfil my dream. I wanted to experience the American dream. “
“Can you explain what happened, why all these migrants died?”
“We were a group of Mexicans migrants. We paid several thousand dollars to American smugglers to cross the Rio Grande. We had to be transported by truck to a city near the border. Then we had to disappear in the American society. However, things went horribly wrong after a few hours. The truck broke down and we were stranded by the smugglers. They were ruthless, cunning and unscrupulous. We were in desertic land without food and water. The migrants started to die after a few hours of wandering in the desert under a burning heat. Even my sister Manuela died of thirst.”
Illegal immigration remains a hotly contested issue as the 2016 presidential campaigns get underway. We have to act know and we have to pass new laws to find a way to help migrants.
Adrien Weill, The New York Times, June 2015
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-01-2016 23:29
Réponse: Dialogue / Migrant de laure95, postée le 31-01-2016 à 19:16:50 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- Illegals (pas au pluriel)migrants.
- a journalist who were (conjugaison) investing
- Mexicans (singulier) migrants.
- Then we had to disappear (voir pour un autre mot) in the American society.
- We were in (article)desertic land.
- The (SOME) migrants started to die.
- to act know (orthographe)
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