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Message de maelle35 posté le 16-03-2016 à 15:28:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je voulais savoir si j'avais fait des fautes dans mon texte! J'espère qu'il va vous plaire. ;)
The scene takes plac in India, in the future's bridegroom living room. There are two families : the future husband's family and the future bride's family. They might have not seen them before. It's the first meeting between the girl and the boy ; the will get married in the near future. The two families are here to debate about this marriage, they are likely to discuss on the weddind. The young woman isn't attracted by the young man ; it's not the handsome husband she would dream of. He looks shy, very old fashion and a little plumby. He looks nice but rather clumsy. That's why, the girl wants to change his future husband because she wants him to be perfect. So, with the remote control, she can change him. At the beginning, she doesn't like the men proposed but then, she's suddenly seduced by one. At the end, the girl's mother robes the remote control to see if it could work on her husband too. Maybe she wishes she had an other man.
In fact this document is an advertissment to that people suscribe to a new satellite. This video wants to say that everybody could choose his partner. If only you could choose your husband as easy as you could choose your satellite tv.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-03-2016 22:10
Message de maelle35 posté le 16-03-2016 à 15:28:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je voulais savoir si j'avais fait des fautes dans mon texte! J'espère qu'il va vous plaire. ;)
The scene takes plac in India, in the future's bridegroom living room. There are two families : the future husband's family and the future bride's family. They might have not seen them before. It's the first meeting between the girl and the boy ; the will get married in the near future. The two families are here to debate about this marriage, they are likely to discuss on the weddind. The young woman isn't attracted by the young man ; it's not the handsome husband she would dream of. He looks shy, very old fashion and a little plumby. He looks nice but rather clumsy. That's why, the girl wants to change his future husband because she wants him to be perfect. So, with the remote control, she can change him. At the beginning, she doesn't like the men proposed but then, she's suddenly seduced by one. At the end, the girl's mother robes the remote control to see if it could work on her husband too. Maybe she wishes she had an other man.
In fact this document is an advertissment to that people suscribe to a new satellite. This video wants to say that everybody could choose his partner. If only you could choose your husband as easy as you could choose your satellite tv.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-03-2016 22:10
Réponse: Arranged marriage/aide de gerondif, postée le 16-03-2016 à 17:08:45 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
The scene takes plac in India, in the future's bridegroom **(déplacez 's) living-room. There are two families : the future husband's family and the future bride's family. They might(ici, might a un sens hypothétique alors que vous vouliez parler d'interdiction je pense, donc soit le prétérit de could soit le remplacant passé de must au sens d'interdiction, to be allowed to) have not seen them(ah, là c'est un pronom réciproque je pense, ils n'ont pas eu le droit de se rencontrer l'un l'autre) before. It's the first meeting between the girl and the boy ; the will (are going to est purement temporel alors que will indique une volonté) get married in the near future. The two families are here to debate about this marriage, they are likely to discuss on the weddind. The young woman isn't attracted by the young man ; it's not the handsome husband she would dream of. He looks shy, very old fashion(participe passé) and a little plumby. He looks nice but rather clumsy. That's why the girl wants to change his(son mari à elle) future husband (to change her husband signifie lui appoter des changements, pas en changer, dites choisir un autre mari) because she wants him to be perfect. So, with the remote control, she can change him. At the beginning, she doesn't like the men proposed to her but then, she's suddenly seduced by one. At In the end, the girl's mother robes(c'est to rob et ce verbe ne va pas, ce n'est pas dérober mais plutôt subtiliser) the remote control to see if it could work on her husband too. Maybe she wishes she had an other man.
In fact this document is an advertisement to that people suscribe to a new satellite. This video wants to say that everybody could choose his(adj possessif pluriel) partner. If only you could choose your husband as easy(il faut l'adverbe facilement) as you could(il faut l'indicatif présent, pas le conditionnel) choose your satellite tv.
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