Brave/braving

Brave/braving
Message from jandark posted on 24-03-2016 at 08:50:31 (D | E | F)
Hello,
I have been writing a text for several days.Now it looks like to be seems ready to be published,but about the last sentence I'm not really sure .
It is :
And there ,far away,the lighthouses on La Comera island are blinking in their firm frequency to show the secure direction to everybody who braving the ocean waves.
Is the construction correct,does in English exist a word like "braving" exist in English?
Thank you for your help .

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Edited by lucile83 on 24-03-2016 13:51

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Re: Brave/braving from gerondif, posted on 24-03-2016 at 10:52:10 (D | E)
Hello,
corrections in green, mistakes or things that can be altered or improved in blue.

And there ,far away,the lighthouses on La Comera island are blinking in their firm frequency to show the secure direction( I would say the safe direction / the right way/ the safe way) to everybody who is braving the ocean waves. (I would say ...to whoever dares brave the ocean waves / to every sailor braving the ocean waves)
Sorry for intruding into your creation!

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Re: Brave/braving from jandark, posted on 24-03-2016 at 15:06:16 (D | E)
Thank you gerondif ,some expressions in my text are yours now,they did the best more better They make my text even better

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Edited by jandark on 25-03-2016 14:15



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Edited by jandark on 25-03-2016 14:17



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Edited by jandark on 25-03-2016 14:18

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Re: Brave/braving from gerondif, posted on 24-03-2016 at 18:31:45 (D | E)
Hello,
they did the best more better ? Ouch!! This hurts!! You should have said:
They make my masterpiece even better!

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