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Message de lea0307 posté le 14-05-2016 à 15:17:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis en Terminale Bac pro, je dois faire un oral en anglais, est-ce que vous pouvez le corrigersvp s'il vous plait ? Je m'excuse d'avance de ce très long texte 
, si vous pouviez aussi me dire si i y a des informations qui ne servent à rien..Merci pour vos réponses.
Les nombres entre parenthèses sont pour m'aider à l'oral.
Voici mon thème sur L'empire State Buildingque j'ai trouvée sur aidé par Wikipédia:
" The Empire State Building is located in Manhattan at New York City. It has a measurement height of 381 (Three hundred and eighty one) meters, and with its antenna, it stands a total of 443 (For hundred and forty three) meters high. Its name is derived from the nickname for New York, the Empire State.
The Empire State Building has 102 Floors ( One hundred and two.)
For nearly forty years it stood as the world's tallest building , from its completion in early 1931 (One thousand nine hundred and trenty one) until the topping out of the original World Trade Center's North Tower in late 1970.(One thousand nine hundred and seventy) Following the September 11 attacks in 2001,(two thousand and one) the Empire State Building was again the tallest building in New York, until One World Trade Center reached a greater height in April 2012 (two thousand and twelve). The Empire State Building is currently the fifth-tallest completed skyscraper in the United States.
The Empire State Building is an American cultural icon. It has been named as one of the Seven Wonders of the Modern World. It was designated as a National Historic Landmark in 1986.(one thousand nine hundred and eighty six)
The Empire State Building was designed by William F. Lamb from the architectural firm Shreve, Lamb and Harmon.
The building has 85 stories of commercial and office space. It has an indoor and outdoor observation deck on the 86th floor.
The Empire State Building was the first building to have more than 100 floors. It has 6,500 windows and 73 elevators. The building houses 1,000 businesses.The building was completed in one year and 45 days.
At 80th floor, it contains a gift shop and an exhibit detailing the building's construction."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2016 16:59
Message de lea0307 posté le 14-05-2016 à 15:17:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis en Terminale Bac pro, je dois faire un oral en anglais, est-ce que vous pouvez le corriger
, si vous pouviez aussi me dire si i y a des informations qui ne servent à rien..Merci pour vos réponses.Les nombres entre parenthèses sont pour m'aider à l'oral.
Voici mon thème sur L'empire State Building
" The Empire State Building is located in Manhattan at New York City. It has a measurement height of 381 (Three hundred and eighty one) meters, and with its antenna, it stands a total of 443 (For hundred and forty three) meters high. Its name is derived from the nickname for New York, the Empire State.
The Empire State Building has 102 Floors ( One hundred and two.)
For nearly forty years it stood as the world's tallest building , from its completion in early 1931 (One thousand nine hundred and trenty one) until the topping out of the original World Trade Center's North Tower in late 1970.(One thousand nine hundred and seventy) Following the September 11 attacks in 2001,(two thousand and one) the Empire State Building was again the tallest building in New York, until One World Trade Center reached a greater height in April 2012 (two thousand and twelve). The Empire State Building is currently the fifth-tallest completed skyscraper in the United States.
The Empire State Building is an American cultural icon. It has been named as one of the Seven Wonders of the Modern World. It was designated as a National Historic Landmark in 1986.(one thousand nine hundred and eighty six)
The Empire State Building was designed by William F. Lamb from the architectural firm Shreve, Lamb and Harmon.
The building has 85 stories of commercial and office space. It has an indoor and outdoor observation deck on the 86th floor.
The Empire State Building was the first building to have more than 100 floors. It has 6,500 windows and 73 elevators. The building houses 1,000 businesses.The building was completed in one year and 45 days.
At 80th floor, it contains a gift shop and an exhibit detailing the building's construction."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2016 16:59
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