Aide/ texte oral

Aide/ texte oral
Message de lowlow54 posté le 15-05-2016 à 15:55:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour a tous,
je suis nouveau sur le forum anglaisfacile et je passe un oral le 24 mai.N'ayant plus été à l’école depuis mes 18 ans je vous demande de vérifier mon texte si possible.
Merci à tous

I started my studies in the restoration of the arch xxx school. for four years I learned the food and service and I got my boe restauration.Je did not like this job thus finished my at the end of my studies I wanted to change. with help from my family i have entered a bakery business. At first I was doing the simplest tasks, after one year I replaced my colleagues and I had to learn to make bread and from that moment I love this job, so I did everything to become really baker. After a difficult adolescence I finally found myself a goal that is to get my diploma as an independent candidate.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-05-2016 19:05

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