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Message de fanny28 posté le 29-06-2016 à 09:55:43 (S | E | F)
Hello,
I wrote this text, a person can could someone help me to correct it please?
Thanks for any reply.
Hmmmmmm!
I don't remember well, maybe it was a hump day but i am sure it was the 21th of june, this day we play music in the streets to celebrate the summer in France it was “ la fête de la musique”.The sun was shining, I took my guitar at the same moment my phone rang, it was my Little Prince, he sent me a mEssage :”joint me to the Bahamas place!”.
I found him, he was with his percussions then we began to play a lot of song (oasis, foo fighters, Coldplay,……), a man stops to heard us and begins to sing with us ( like a karaoke but not glitter here ^^ ), other persons came to us, it was great. They were foreigners, came from to Uk, USA, Canada, India, Brazil or China, what the wonderful sound! Each person brought, their accent their sonority all people smiling and enjoyed this moment.
It was a beautiful day,ladies and gentlemen,
See you soon
Fanny ^^
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-06-2016 11:08
Message de fanny28 posté le 29-06-2016 à 09:55:43 (S | E | F)
Hello,
I wrote this text,
Thanks for any reply.
Hmmmmmm!
I don't remember well, maybe it was a hump day but i am sure it was the 21th of june, this day we play music in the streets to celebrate the summer in France it was “ la fête de la musique”.The sun was shining, I took my guitar at the same moment my phone rang, it was my Little Prince, he sent me a mEssage :”joint me to the Bahamas place!”.
I found him, he was with his percussions then we began to play a lot of song (oasis, foo fighters, Coldplay,……), a man stops to heard us and begins to sing with us ( like a karaoke but not glitter here ^^ ), other persons came to us, it was great. They were foreigners, came from to Uk, USA, Canada, India, Brazil or China, what the wonderful sound! Each person brought, their accent their sonority all people smiling and enjoyed this moment.
It was a beautiful day,ladies and gentlemen,
See you soon
Fanny ^^
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-06-2016 11:08
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