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Message de logarithme posté le 23-09-2016 à 16:33:46 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I just wrote an article about Cheops Pyramid and I would like you to check if there is any mistake or something I could change to make it more "English" please.
Thank you for your help, enjoy !
Elise
Cheops pyramid:
The great pyramid of Gizeh is 4 500 years old. The pyramid is the only building remaining from the 7 Wonders of the Ancient World. For millenniums, Khufu’s Pyramid has been the tallest, the biggest and the bulkiest monument of the world. The total mass is about 5 000 000 tons and it is all made of limestone. Even if the monument has been explored and examined in its entirety, it remains to be the most enigmatic monument archeologists and Egyptologists ever studied.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-09-2016 22:07
Message de logarithme posté le 23-09-2016 à 16:33:46 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I just wrote an article about Cheops Pyramid and I would like you to check if there is any mistake or something I could change to make it more "English" please.
Thank you for your help, enjoy !
Elise
Cheops pyramid:
The great pyramid of Gizeh is 4 500 years old. The pyramid is the only building remaining from the 7 Wonders of the Ancient World. For millenniums, Khufu’s Pyramid has been the tallest, the biggest and the bulkiest monument of the world. The total mass is about 5 000 000 tons and it is all made of limestone. Even if the monument has been explored and examined in its entirety, it remains to be the most enigmatic monument archeologists and Egyptologists ever studied.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-09-2016 22:07
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