Article/ Pokemon Go

Article/ Pokemon Go
Message de rayane99 posté le 01-10-2016 à 08:13:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un article de journal à faire et je suis venu demander s'il y a des fautes s'il vous plait?
Merci de votre lecture.

WHAT THERE IS HIDDEN BEHIND THE PHENOMENON POKEMON GO!
Pokemon Go is a virtual game recently released and wich is played on a smartphone. It is the current trend everywhere on the world.

Who created Pokemon Go, and for whom ?
Pokemon Go was created by John Hanke,he is the CEO of an American company called Niantic. This man is a former Google employee. We asked him how he had the idea to create something like that and he told us “In 2010, I dreamed of a Smartphone application that allows to walk playing while being connected to the real world, so I created this game.”
This game concern all players everywhere in the world but especially children.

What is this game and how to play it?
It is an app store game where you must catch little animated creature called Pokemon, players must find, locate, catch,battle and train a Pokemon. However, we must have an internet connection and a smartphone in order to play then download this game and good game!.A lot of bystanders told us “I love this game, I really like it” or“ it's a great game, but catch them all is impossible.”

Where can we play at this game?
We can play everywhere all around the world thanks to the virtual map, so we don't have border.Some players told us “I regularly through the city in search of pokemon”.

In what time we can play?
This game is playable at any time and that any day it.

Why this game is a dangerous game?
It can be dangerous because when people playing pokemon go they are too focused on the game so they become unconscious. Some player told us "I walked into a pole" or "a car knocked me down".

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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-10-2016 09:22
Mise en forme standard.

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Réponse : Article/ Pokemon Go de lucile83, postée le 02-10-2016 à 09:55:08 (S | E)
Hello,
Erreurs en bleu. Barré = inutile. Vous semblez fâché avec les pluriels ou les S en général... et les questions.

WHAT THERE IS HIDDEN BEHIND THE PHENOMENON POKEMON GO!
Pokemon Go is a virtual game recently released and wich is played on a smartphone. It is the current trend everywhere on the world.

Who created Pokemon Go, and for whom ?
Pokemon Go was created by John Hanke,he is the CEO of an American company called Niantic. This man is a former Google employee. We asked him how he had the idea to create something like that and he told us “In 2010, I dreamed of a Smartphone application that allows to walk playing while being connected to the real world, so I created this game.”
This game concern all players everywhere in the world but especially children.

What is this game and how to play it?
It is an app store game where you must catch little animated creature called Pokemon, players must find, locate, catch,battle and train a Pokemon. However, we must have an internet connection and a smartphone in order to play then download this game and good game!.A lot of bystanders told us “I love this game, I really like it” or“ it's a great game, but catch them all is impossible.”

Where can we play at this game?
We can play everywhere all around the world thanks to the virtual map, so we don't have ... border.Some players told us “I regularly through the city in search of pokemon”.

In what time we can play?
This game is playable at any time and that any day it.

Why this game is a dangerous game?
It can be dangerous because when people playing pokemon go they are too focused on the game so they become unconscious ...autre adjectif ou précisez de quoi. Some player told us "I walked into a pole" or "a car knocked me down".

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Réponse : Article/ Pokemon Go de rayane99, postée le 02-10-2016 à 16:46:47 (S | E)
Merci pour votre aide, je n'ai pas réussi à tout corriger mais voici la correction:

WHAT IS HIDDEN BEHIND THE PHENOMENON POKEMON GO!
Pokemon Go is a virtual game recently released that is played on a smartphone. It is the current trend everywhere in the world.

Who created Pokemon Go, and for whom ?
Pokemon Go was created by John Hanke,he is the CEO of an American company called Niantic. This man is a former Google employee. We asked him how he had the idea to create something like that and he told us “In 2010, I dreamed of a Smartphone application that allows to walk playing while being connected to the real world, so I created this game.”
This game concerns all players everywhere in the world but especially children.

What is this game and how to play it?
It is an app store game where you must catch little animated creature (c'est quoi le problème) called Pokemon, players must find, locate, catch,battle and train a Pokemon. However, we must have an internet connection and a smartphone in order to play then download this game and good game!.A lot of bystanders told us “I love this game, I really like it” or“ it's a great game, but catch them all is impossible.”

Where can we play this game?
We can play everywhere all around the world thanks to the virtual map, so we don't have no border.Some players told us “I cross regularly the city in search of Pokemons”.

In what time we can play?
This game is playable at any time and everyday.

Why it is a dangerous game?
It can be dangerous because when people play pokemon go they are too focused on the game so they become unconscious. Some players told us "I walked into a pole" or "a car knocked me down".

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