Correction/ grammaticale

Correction/ grammaticale
Message de lauradby51 posté le 11-10-2016 à 19:16:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pourriez-vous corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît ? :

"our company would like to talk about brand of food.For us, brand it's the synonyme of quality.If you buy brand we garantee a good product with tasty and healthy.
Moreover, all of animals are treated, fed to present you a product in the norm.
The product without brand don't garantee quality, even if it's are not expensive we advise you to buy brand for a good food."
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-10-2016 21:46

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Réponse : Correction/ grammaticale de laure95, postée le 20-10-2016 à 18:38:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- our company would like to talk about brand of food (food brands): une personne parle, pas une entreprise.
- For us, brand it's (brand est déjà le sujet de IS, enlever donc IT)the synonyme (orthographe)of quality.
- If you buy (il manque un possessif)brand we garantee (orthographe)a good product with tasty and healthy (ce sont des adjectifs, donc il manque un nom derrière sauf si tu as voulu mettre des noms).
- Moreover, all of (enlever OF) animals are treated fed to present you a product in the norm.
- The product without brand don't (singulier) garantee (orthographe)quality,
- it's are not expensive
- for a good food.": pas d'article A: FOOD est un mot invariable.

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