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Message de vanillelcd posté le 23-10-2016 à 09:43:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde !
Je suis dans le supérieur et j'ai très prochainement un oral d'anglais sur la promotion d'un produit, les bouteilles d'eau xxx. Quelqu'un aurait-il l’amabilité de corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance !
PROMOTION
To promote the new products, the focus is on water purity, comparable to a diamond. More to be delicious, this water is good for health.
In the context of promotion, a new logo was created. It is plain and elegant, modelled on the brand image. It will be present on the bottles and on advertisements.
Partnership with gourmet restaurants
Wholesale of bottles at attractive prices for gourmet restaurants and luxurious hotel. The brand image will be beautified, more prestigious and a wealthy clientele will discover xxx.
Advertisements in magazines
The advertisement in magazines it remains one of the most effective ways to develop brands. It affects millions of people, occurring at regular intervals, benefits from an excellent return on their investment, develops brand awareness and increases noticeably the sales. This is why the advertissements for our water bottles will appear in "luxury" magazines.
Youtube/Blog target
Today, internet is one of the first communication networks in the world. And social networks are at the top of this virtual world. We are determined to establishing partnerships with new "internet stars" that for their promotion will receive free bottles xxx. Here are targeted « beauty Youtubers/bloggers » and « sports youtubers » who will drink with our water and will recommend to their followers.
Product placements in videos are also contemplated.
Futur
In view that the brand would revived and productive, we might consider to have a famous ambassador for the brand and target TV advertising.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-10-2016 10:06
Message de vanillelcd posté le 23-10-2016 à 09:43:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde !
Je suis dans le supérieur et j'ai très prochainement un oral d'anglais sur la promotion d'un produit, les bouteilles d'eau xxx. Quelqu'un aurait-il l’amabilité de corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance !
PROMOTION
To promote the new products, the focus is on water purity, comparable to a diamond. More to be delicious, this water is good for health.
In the context of promotion, a new logo was created. It is plain and elegant, modelled on the brand image. It will be present on the bottles and on advertisements.
Partnership with gourmet restaurants
Wholesale of bottles at attractive prices for gourmet restaurants and luxurious hotel. The brand image will be beautified, more prestigious and a wealthy clientele will discover xxx.
Advertisements in magazines
The advertisement in magazines it remains one of the most effective ways to develop brands. It affects millions of people, occurring at regular intervals, benefits from an excellent return on their investment, develops brand awareness and increases noticeably the sales. This is why the advertissements for our water bottles will appear in "luxury" magazines.
Youtube/Blog target
Today, internet is one of the first communication networks in the world. And social networks are at the top of this virtual world. We are determined to establishing partnerships with new "internet stars" that for their promotion will receive free bottles xxx. Here are targeted « beauty Youtubers/bloggers » and « sports youtubers » who will drink with our water and will recommend to their followers.
Product placements in videos are also contemplated.
Futur
In view that the brand would revived and productive, we might consider to have a famous ambassador for the brand and target TV advertising.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-10-2016 10:06
Réponse : Oral/marketing de vianneytreps, postée le 27-10-2016 à 13:57:39 (S | E)
More to be -> In addition
Quelques accords (pluriels) à rectifier
Internet -> the Internet
Futur -> Future (ou Future plans)
would revived -> would be revived
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