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Message de frstudent posté le 31-10-2016 à 23:34:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois envoyer des mails afin de trouver un stage dans le cadre de ma formation.
Pourriez-vous corriger ma lettre de motivation et mon mail s'il vous plait?
Mercibcp beaucoup d'avance de votre aide et de votre rapidité!
mail:
Dear Mr XXXX,
I am a 4th year food engineering student (enrolled in a 5 year degree equivalent to a Master level)
at XXXX in France.
As part of my degree, I wish to carry out a scientific research project in one of your laboratories
I am pleased to present my spontaneous application for an internship of 20 weeks.
you willfind enclosed my resume, my cover letter and my internship agreement.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.
yours faithfully,
XXXX
cover letter :
Dear Professor XXX,
I am a 4th year food engineering student (enrolled in a 5 year degree equivalent to a Master level) at XXXX in France. As part of my degree, I wish to carry out a scientific research project in one of your laboratories. I would to expand my knowledge and experience in the area of research. I am writing to express my interest and my enthusiasm for the opportunity to do this internship in your university. I was recommended by xxxx and xxxxx, fellow students, who did an internship last year.
I would enjoy working at the XXXXX, especially in the field of food sciences, linked with sport and health. I am really interested in your studies on XXXXX.
Our internship abroad should last a minimum of 15 weeks and take place between March and the end of August, provided I pass my exams. This internship is submitted to a tripartite agreement between your research institute, XXXX and myself which sets all the terms and conditions of the placement. A copy is attached to this letter.
I have developed communication and organizational skills through group works and participation in school clubs. My organizational skills will be an asset, allowing me to complete tasks with efficiency.
With a view to applying for scholarships, approaching potential sponsors and submitting my project to the school’s curriculum committee for approval, I would be grateful to you if you could keep me informed whether you can accept me or not in your research group within two weeks.
I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks in advance,
Yours sincerely,
XXXXX
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-11-2016 09:05
Message de frstudent posté le 31-10-2016 à 23:34:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois envoyer des mails afin de trouver un stage dans le cadre de ma formation.
Pourriez-vous corriger ma lettre de motivation et mon mail s'il vous plait?
Merci
mail:
Dear Mr XXXX,
I am a 4th year food engineering student (enrolled in a 5 year degree equivalent to a Master level)
at XXXX in France.
As part of my degree, I wish to carry out a scientific research project in one of your laboratories
I am pleased to present my spontaneous application for an internship of 20 weeks.
you willfind enclosed my resume, my cover letter and my internship agreement.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.
yours faithfully,
XXXX
cover letter :
Dear Professor XXX,
I am a 4th year food engineering student (enrolled in a 5 year degree equivalent to a Master level) at XXXX in France. As part of my degree, I wish to carry out a scientific research project in one of your laboratories. I would to expand my knowledge and experience in the area of research. I am writing to express my interest and my enthusiasm for the opportunity to do this internship in your university. I was recommended by xxxx and xxxxx, fellow students, who did an internship last year.
I would enjoy working at the XXXXX, especially in the field of food sciences, linked with sport and health. I am really interested in your studies on XXXXX.
Our internship abroad should last a minimum of 15 weeks and take place between March and the end of August, provided I pass my exams. This internship is submitted to a tripartite agreement between your research institute, XXXX and myself which sets all the terms and conditions of the placement. A copy is attached to this letter.
I have developed communication and organizational skills through group works and participation in school clubs. My organizational skills will be an asset, allowing me to complete tasks with efficiency.
With a view to applying for scholarships, approaching potential sponsors and submitting my project to the school’s curriculum committee for approval, I would be grateful to you if you could keep me informed whether you can accept me or not in your research group within two weeks.
I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks in advance,
Yours sincerely,
XXXXX
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-11-2016 09:05
Réponse : Lettre/ motivation de frstudent, postée le 02-11-2016 à 22:09:02 (S | E)
Veuillez m'excuser pour la rapidité de mon introduction et pour les fautes et abréviations qui s'y sont glissées. Ce forum m'est apparu comme une unique solution à mon problème et j'ai écrit un peu rapidement mon message
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