Myths and heroes/aide

Myths and heroes/aide
Message de sarilou posté le 15-04-2017 à 22:12:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous corriger mon introduction pour mon oral d'anglais sur Myths and heroes s'il vous plaît?

Intro: I'm going to talk about myths and heroes. First of all, I would like to give a definition of both notions : for me a hero is someone who did something incredible to defend a value or an idea. He or she is not necessarely strong or muscled but at least intelligent. A myth is a real or imaginary story that is ensue from greeco-latino legend which is made for explain mysterious aspects of the reality life and often it tell the story of a hero. Some may have factual origins, while others are completely fictional. So we can wonder who can be considered as a hero? (Ici je vais parler d'un document présentant un super héros, un sportif et un vieux gradé et à chaque fois la légende est : HERO? ensuite je parlerais du poème The Hero de Siegfried SASSOON et enfin je parlerais des firefighters de l'attaque du 11 septembre est-ce que vous pensez que ma problématique est en adéquation avec ces documents?)

Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de me corriger.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-04-2017 22:14

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Réponse : Myths and heroes/aide de laure95, postée le 17-04-2017 à 18:07:11 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- for me a hero is someone who did (mettre au present perfect)something incredible to defend a value or an idea.
- A myth is a real or imaginary story that is ensue (participe passé)from greeco-latino legend which is made for (pour + verbe = to)explain (the)mysterious aspects of the reality (mettre l'adjectif)life and often (pas à la bonne place) it tell (faute de conjugaison)the story of a hero.
- we can wonder who can be considered as a hero?: enlever le point d'interrogation (interrogative indirecte) (Ici je vais parler d'un document présentant un super héros, un sportif et un vieux gradé et à chaque fois la légende est : HERO? ensuite je parlerais du poème The Hero de Siegfried SASSOON et enfin je parlerais des firefighters de l'attaque du 11 septembre est-ce que vous pensez que ma problématique est en adéquation avec ces documents?)OUI

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Réponse : Myths and heroes/aide de sarilou, postée le 17-04-2017 à 18:45:57 (S | E)
Bonjour, est-ce que c'est mieux comme ça?

Intro: I'm going to talk about myths and heroes. First of all, I would like to give a definition of both notions : for me a hero is someone who has done something incredible to defend a value or an idea. He or she is not necessarely strong or muscled but at least intelligent. A myth is a real or imaginary story that is ensued from greeco-latino legend which is made to explain the mysterious aspects of the real life and it often tells the story of a hero. Some may have factual origins, while others are completely fictional. So we can wonder who can be considered as a hero. In first place I will talk about a cartoon which represent different kinds of hero then I would like to talk about a poem : « The hero » by Siegfried SASSOON and finally about firefighters in the eleventh september.

Et merci encore

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Réponse : Myths and heroes/aide de laure95, postée le 18-04-2017 à 16:04:05 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Oui, c'est mieux.
In (article)first place I will talk about a cartoon which represent (faute de conjugaison)different kinds of hero (pluriel) then I would like to talk about a poem : « The hero » by Siegfried SASSOON and finally about firefighters in (pas la bonne préposition)the eleventh september.

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